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Moon Tides

Undertows sweeping; Currents pulling; Pictures flash by; Like silent film on fast forward. Knowing not else; I struggle to endure but; What- nay, why; Weeping eyes. Warriors don’t cry; rebellion to tyranny obedience to God Help me understand

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Date: 4/12/2011 2:57:00 AM
A great title, that follows through with your amazing thought. "Weeping eyes"; most times aren't tears like sprinkles from the soul? It takes a brave man to cry, Leonard. Love the descriptive velocity of the first few lines. Hope all's well with you! Wishing you the best....Mikki
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