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Moon Spoon

Spoonfuls of your moon From behind the silk cocoon What a crimson boon ______________________________________ 19/12/2016 Contest Sponsored by : Kai Michael Neumann

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Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 12/28/2016 5:12:00 AM

Strange insight. Great. Solomon Ochwo Oburu

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/28/2016 11:41:00 PM

Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 12/23/2016 3:48:00 PM

A rich haiku, Probir. Served w/the proper delicacy of a master poet's pen. Charming poetry. Love and joy to you.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:26:00 PM

Thank you ...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/22/2016 11:03:00 PM

this is very good, Probir, good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/23/2016 6:27:00 PM

Thank you ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/20/2016 5:58:00 AM

How tempting! Great one dear, Probir!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/20/2016 9:31:00 AM

Glad that you could read and respond too ...

Doug Vinson

Date: 12/19/2016 9:13:00 PM

Probir. : ) Simply a delicious poem.

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 11:21:00 PM

Thank you ...

Winged Warrior

Date: 12/19/2016 10:37:00 AM

Superbly done my friend...god bless...^WW^

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 11:22:00 AM

Thank you ... but yet no wing in view! ...

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2016 10:22:00 AM

WoW! Probir, This is such a lovely write with amazing rhymes. I wish you the best of luck in the contest: -) Alexis

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 11:22:00 AM

Thank you ...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/19/2016 6:22:00 AM

Wow, Probir! such a beautiful rhyming haiku:) a winner in my eyes:)

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 6:47:00 AM

Thank you ...

Supraja Kannan

Date: 12/19/2016 4:34:00 AM

Wow...This is fantastic... A rhyming haiku.. Very well done... A big 7...

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 5:33:00 AM

Thank you ..

Jan Allison

Date: 12/19/2016 3:19:00 AM

Lovely lines Probir I have never seen a rhyming haiku before!:-) hugs Jan xx

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 5:34:00 AM

Thank you ...

White Wolf

Date: 12/19/2016 1:31:00 AM

Splendid haiku, Probir! And good luck!

Probir Gupta
Date: 12/19/2016 5:38:00 AM

Thank you ...