Moon Sighs

Catching Moon Sighs

 
From time to time
as clouds pass
     — those  plumpted puffs — 
               touring  by 
…Out 
      from behind them
  a
  Night’s  lit
               Blink!
             will occur
for: 
T’is  our
Moon sighing 
at Time’s insistent nudges 
			to fleet  on by
And at which overseeing Venus
     winks her sympathies… 






(c)  s.y. eslinger6/2024
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 10:03 AM
Hello Sally i enjoyed to read this poem as well. I can vision the scene in my imagination. This is also my fav.
Bayles Avatar
July 2, 2024 at 9:11 AM
The imagery is so beautifully conveyed.
Lawrence Avatar
June 26, 2024 at 8:44 PM
Deep, Beautiful and mysterious. I love the nuances of time and space Sally. I’ve missed reading your poems and I’m happy to be back to do so. Oh hugs and all good wishes, Susan
Buhagiar Avatar
June 24, 2024 at 5:31 AM
Rightly said, Sally. Very imaginative. Blessings.
DiMino Avatar
June 21, 2024 at 8:57 PM
Playful, titillating moon. I do not think that it is The Man in the moon, but a romantic woman instead -- desperately in need of makeup. Lovely read. I am smiling also. Very creative.
Beaufort Avatar
June 20, 2024 at 10:52 AM
Sally, this makes me smile. I can smile imagining each moon sighting. There are so many beautiful visual treats we can observe if we have the right mindset. I am so very pleased to read your work. Each poem is like a flash in my sometimes cloudy life. Your work touches my heart....so I am so very thankful for what you do. Your work is an insight into your mind, and I imagine it to be a wonderful and creative place. Everyone who you touch has to consider themselves lucky!
Ashley Avatar
June 17, 2024 at 11:05 AM
Dear Sally, your verse floats in beauty upon the page and in my imagination. I adore "those plumpted puffs" -sigh.. so lovely. Such a splendid piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Bayles Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 7:59 PM
So beautiful, and a nice portrayal of the connection between the moon and Venus.
Wraith Avatar
June 16, 2024 at 7:22 AM
A captivating cosmic tale, with unique formatting. This style and layout add to the whimsical celestial beauty of this piece. Well done dear
One Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 11:26 AM
A deep cosmic poem, Sally.. i like how you formatted it also..
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2024 at 8:55 AM
An image i love seeing, a peek-a-boo sight. Love your image as a moon sigh.
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