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Moon Sighs

Catching Moon Sighs From time to time as clouds pass — those plumpted puffs — touring by …Out from behind them a Night’s lit Blink! will occur for: T’is our Moon sighing at Time’s insistent nudges to fleet on by And at which overseeing Venus winks her sympathies… (c) s.y. eslinger6/2024

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/9/2024 10:03:00 AM

Hello Sally i enjoyed to read this poem as well. I can vision the scene in my imagination. This is also my fav.

Mike Bayles

Date: 7/2/2024 9:11:00 AM

The imagery is so beautifully conveyed.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 6/26/2024 8:44:00 PM

Deep, Beautiful and mysterious. I love the nuances of time and space Sally. I’ve missed reading your poems and I’m happy to be back to do so. Oh hugs and all good wishes, Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/24/2024 5:31:00 AM

Rightly said, Sally. Very imaginative. Blessings.

Joe Dimino

Date: 6/21/2024 8:57:00 PM

Playful, titillating moon. I do not think that it is The Man in the moon, but a romantic woman instead -- desperately in need of makeup. Lovely read. I am smiling also. Very creative.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/20/2024 10:52:00 AM

Sally, this makes me smile. I can smile imagining each moon sighting. There are so many beautiful visual treats we can observe if we have the right mindset. I am so very pleased to read your work. Each poem is like a flash in my sometimes cloudy life. Your work touches my heart....so I am so very thankful for what you do. Your work is an insight into your mind, and I imagine it to be a wonderful and creative place. Everyone who you touch has to consider themselves lucky!

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/17/2024 11:05:00 AM

Dear Sally, your verse floats in beauty upon the page and in my imagination. I adore "those plumpted puffs" -sigh.. so lovely. Such a splendid piece! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Mike Bayles

Date: 6/16/2024 7:59:00 PM

So beautiful, and a nice portrayal of the connection between the moon and Venus.