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Moon Rakers

MOON RAKERS The old tale goes in Wiltshire when They wisely played the parts of fools In deception of the Revenue men Employed dumb faces and farming tools The Brandy kegs you see were hid In village pond sunk out of sight While making retrieval from its mid The Constables arrived in the night These Wiltshire lads donned idiot leer And played the role of dunce or loon Then pointing at lake mirror clear Averred ‘Were raking for the moon!’ An alternate allegory I perceive The Moon and stars in water bright May be the dreams we strive to achieve Deceiving ourselves? or clearing sight While others might see us as dreamers and fools Could we maybe in spirit commune Take up our metaphysical tools Delve phantasy deep; rake for the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/25/2018 1:40:00 PM
Great theme, so well written. Congratulations on the win, Geoffrey! ...Fran
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/25/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Francis
Date: 1/25/2018 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Geoffrey. Loved the imagery.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/25/2018 2:36:00 PM
Merci bien, Line
Date: 1/24/2018 10:27:00 AM
Fantastic original flowing ink Groffrey, congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/24/2018 4:27:00 PM
Than you for the kind words, Maureen
Date: 1/24/2018 7:09:00 AM
great poem and congrats :)-luloo
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/24/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thanks Luloo
Date: 1/24/2018 5:48:00 AM
I love the rhythm of this, Geoffrey, the historical English setting and feel, and the wonderful metaphor and allegory! Blessings and congrats on your THIRD PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/24/2018 4:23:00 PM
I am honoured by your award. Thank you, Gregory

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