Moon Rakers

MOON RAKERS

The old tale goes in Wiltshire when
They wisely played the parts of fools
In deception of the Revenue men
Employed dumb faces and farming tools

The Brandy kegs you see were hid
In village pond sunk out of sight
While making retrieval from its mid
The Constables arrived in the night

These Wiltshire lads donned idiot leer
And played the role of dunce or loon
Then pointing at lake mirror clear
Averred ‘Were raking for the moon!’ 

An alternate allegory I perceive
The Moon and stars in water bright
May be the dreams we strive to achieve 
Deceiving ourselves? or clearing sight

While others might see us as dreamers and fools
Could we maybe in spirit commune
Take up our metaphysical tools
Delve phantasy deep; rake for the moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Grasso Avatar
January 25, 2018 at 1:40 PM
Great theme, so well written. Congratulations on the win, Geoffrey! ...Fran
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January 25, 2018 at 2:37 PM
Thank you, Francis
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January 25, 2018 at 12:49 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Geoffrey. Loved the imagery.
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January 25, 2018 at 2:36 PM
Merci bien, Line
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January 24, 2018 at 10:27 AM
Fantastic original flowing ink Groffrey, congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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January 24, 2018 at 4:27 PM
Than you for the kind words, Maureen
Scars Avatar
January 24, 2018 at 7:09 AM
great poem and congrats :)-luloo
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January 24, 2018 at 4:24 PM
Thanks Luloo
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January 24, 2018 at 5:48 AM
I love the rhythm of this, Geoffrey, the historical English setting and feel, and the wonderful metaphor and allegory! Blessings and congrats on your THIRD PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
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January 24, 2018 at 4:23 PM
I am honoured by your award. Thank you, Gregory
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