Moon Rakers

MOON RAKERS

The old tale goes in Wiltshire when
They wisely played the parts of fools
In deception of the Revenue men
Employed dumb faces and farming tools

The Brandy kegs you see were hid
In village pond sunk out of sight
While making retrieval from its mid
The Constables arrived in the night

These Wiltshire lads donned idiot leer
And played the role of dunce or loon
Then pointing at lake mirror clear
Averred ‘Were raking for the moon!’ 

An alternate allegory I perceive
The Moon and stars in water bright
May be the dreams we strive to achieve 
Deceiving ourselves? or clearing sight

While others might see us as dreamers and fools
Could we maybe in spirit commune
Take up our metaphysical tools
Delve phantasy deep; rake for the moon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/25/2018 1:40:00 PM
Great theme, so well written. Congratulations on the win, Geoffrey! ...Fran
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/25/2018 2:37:00 PM
Thank you, Francis
Date: 1/25/2018 12:49:00 PM
Congrats on your fine win, Geoffrey. Loved the imagery.
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/25/2018 2:36:00 PM
Merci bien, Line
Date: 1/24/2018 10:27:00 AM
Fantastic original flowing ink Groffrey, congratulations on your win :) xomo!
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/24/2018 4:27:00 PM
Than you for the kind words, Maureen
Date: 1/24/2018 7:09:00 AM
great poem and congrats :)-luloo
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/24/2018 4:24:00 PM
Thanks Luloo
Date: 1/24/2018 5:48:00 AM
I love the rhythm of this, Geoffrey, the historical English setting and feel, and the wonderful metaphor and allegory! Blessings and congrats on your THIRD PLACE! Thank you so much for entering my contest! :-)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 1/24/2018 4:23:00 PM
I am honoured by your award. Thank you, Gregory
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