Moon Picture

Was that a man in the moon
Riding over the dune
Or is it a woman
Perhaps built like a man
Singing a lonely tune
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
July 5, 2013 at 11:02 PM
an interesting one. Like looking at clouds and seeing different images!
Williams Avatar
March 3, 2013 at 3:09 PM
tahera congrats on your big win...David
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March 3, 2013 at 9:53 AM
Tahera, thank you for the nice and beautiful poem, many blessings with your wonderful win~ PD
Kendrick Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 3:18 AM
Cute limerick..I got a chuckle..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morning..I was gladdened at your delightful comments on my work..Sara
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:49 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Tahera. Have a wonderful weekend. Excellent entry for Deb's contest should you enter it. Love, Carol
Locksley Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:28 AM
What a humorous limerick, Tahera! Is this your entry for Deborah's new contest? Good job! Have a nice weekend, Diane
Devonshire Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 8:32 AM
Very funny limerick, Tahera!! I love it! Great work here. Now I guess you have to decide which of your two "man in the moon" poems to enter in the contest. Both are terrific. Love, Carolyn
Smalling Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Fantastic and good write, keep singing.
Culverhouse Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 5:46 AM
strange thoughts but there are times I look at some people and wonder is that a man or woman.
Neels Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 5:32 AM
Witty write Tahera, made me smile this afternoon :)
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 3:52 AM
Very creative and very imaginative write with fine images, Tahera
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