Kim Rodrigues Poet Alliteration

Moon Over Loch Ness

Gliding, as placid as a sailboat.
Harming, no one.

Mooning, the business of night.
Glaring, the sight of something awesome —
a barely visible silhouette, shimmering.

Doppelgänger-eyes like moons, in the dark,
could spoil the habitation of Loch Ness.

Nessie nestles into her nebulous surroundings.

12/28/2017
Loch Ness Contest

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Andrea Dietrich January 31, 2018 at 6:00 PM This is wonderful. Love the imagery and that doppelganger-eyes line!!! Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2018 at 3:07 PM Glad you enjoyed the doppelgängers:)

Sandra Haight January 31, 2018 at 4:30 PM You imaged the mysterious scene so well, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2018 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Sandra!

Gary Smith January 31, 2018 at 3:06 PM Lovely write Kim, congrats :) Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2018 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Gary!

Line Gauthier January 31, 2018 at 2:51 PM Congrats on your winning poem, Kim. Well done. Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2018 at 3:06 PM Thank you, Line!

Eve Roper January 31, 2018 at 12:48 PM Awesome write, Kim, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`* Kim Rodrigues February 1, 2018 at 3:05 PM Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2017 at 7:54 PM Love the way you used words in this poem to create the atmosphere of this mysterious creature. Very pretty, my mischievous sister!!!(loved your comment on my middle sonnet) Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2017 at 8:25 PM LOL! :) and thanks!

Agnes Krampe December 28, 2017 at 5:49 PM Lovely Nessie poem, Kim, I especially like the last line. Good luck in the contest. Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2017 at 6:05 PM Thank you, Agnes!

Silent One December 28, 2017 at 3:57 PM Great alliteration added to this poem.. good luck in the contest... Kim Rodrigues December 28, 2017 at 5:21 PM Thank you, Silent!