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Moon Over Loch Ness

Gliding, as placid as a sailboat. Harming, no one. Mooning, the business of night. Glaring, the sight of something awesome — a barely visible silhouette, shimmering. Doppelgänger-eyes like moons, in the dark, could spoil the habitation of Loch Ness. Nessie nestles into her nebulous surroundings. 12/28/2017 Loch Ness Contest

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Date: 1/31/2018 6:00:00 PM
This is wonderful. Love the imagery and that doppelganger-eyes line!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 3:07:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed the doppelgängers:)
Date: 1/31/2018 4:30:00 PM
You imaged the mysterious scene so well, Kim. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 1/31/2018 3:06:00 PM
Lovely write Kim, congrats :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Gary!
Date: 1/31/2018 2:51:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem, Kim. Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 3:06:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 1/31/2018 12:48:00 PM
Awesome write, Kim, congratulation on your win ! Hugs Eve ~`*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/1/2018 3:05:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 12/28/2017 7:54:00 PM
Love the way you used words in this poem to create the atmosphere of this mysterious creature. Very pretty, my mischievous sister!!!(loved your comment on my middle sonnet)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 8:25:00 PM
LOL! :) and thanks!
Date: 12/28/2017 5:49:00 PM
Lovely Nessie poem, Kim, I especially like the last line. Good luck in the contest.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 6:05:00 PM
Thank you, Agnes!
Date: 12/28/2017 3:57:00 PM
Great alliteration added to this poem.. good luck in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/28/2017 5:21:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!

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