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Moon of Sadness

Nude in front of you Slapped by bats but kissed by light Enigmatic scars No one understands but YOU... I dream of dreams of moon life... I pose - you draw me You take pictures of my soul Wondering what's wrong... Sadness... immortality How much Love I cannot give! For Tracie's "TANKA ME A MOONLIGHT DREAM... "

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/17/2017 1:48:00 PM

A very beautiful written poem, i really enjoyed reading your poems as all of them are unique and each poem is written as beautiful as the next however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/8/2012 10:28:00 AM

This is a beauty with a pinch of sadness Iolanda. I see congratulations are in order as well. Hope you are having a fabulous weekend. love Wilma

Iolanda Scripca
Date: 7/8/2012 10:34:00 AM

Thank you, dear Wilma!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/27/2012 3:31:00 PM

Iolanda, how goes the ESL job thing? Will you be doing home stay?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/16/2011 9:58:00 PM

I'm glad to see this was a winning poem,Iolanda. Belated congratulations to you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/6/2011 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Tracie's "Moonlight Dreams" contest Iolanda. Love, Carol

Audrey Haick

Date: 12/4/2011 2:54:00 PM

Congratulations on a very fine win, Iolanda! Enjoyed! Love, Annalise

Bob Quigley

Date: 12/4/2011 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Iolanda.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/3/2011 11:31:00 AM

That second line of yours struck me... I like the contrast that you put in there, Iolanda! I like how you gave this a melancholic feel...another unique take that I saw for this contest :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/2/2011 10:41:00 PM

Another wonderful contest entry.. Good luck in the contest... a very touching write... enjoyed stopping by tooo read your poem~;-) always,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2011 9:00:00 PM

I love the sadness you invoke with this poem, Iolanda. Always you employ atmosphere! Luv, Andrea

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 12/2/2011 9:11:00 AM

An excellent write Iolanda . Have a nice weekend. love phyl

Iolanda Scripca
Date: 12/2/2011 3:30:00 PM

I hope you have a great weekend with your son too, dear Phyllis! Love, iolanda

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/2/2011 8:55:00 AM

Wow, Iolanda........how wonderful, introspective, and melancholy this is!! What a deep, and unique poem this is! A winner!! ps.........Happy Holidays, hope all is better in the New Year!! :)

Iolanda Scripca
Date: 12/2/2011 3:29:00 PM

Thank you, dear Carrie! ...and Happy Holidays to you too!!! Love, iolanda