Moon Face

Moon Face
In dreams of you, I am sitting in a quiet garden Looking at the beautiful full super-moon. Night falls the garden is shrouded in a mist. The moonbeams kiss the blossomed flowers. The moonlight softly illuminates the beauty of her face. I look out into the moon I see her lovely face. She beckons me to come to laugh and love. We laugh, we dance and we love. The wind blows rapidly over my face. The moon softly whispers in my ears, The wind touch, the moon whisper reveals I am here, she is there, hundreds of miles between

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Date: 9/7/2023 1:57:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your wisdom through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 9/3/2021 4:17:00 AM
Bro this is good
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Date: 4/2/2015 8:33:00 PM
Sirat, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Date: 9/24/2014 2:22:00 PM
Welcome Sirat: I loved the way you made the moon personify everything. Great Write.
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Date: 9/22/2014 10:29:00 PM
Very nice write, smooth...I like it :)
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Sirat Ahmad Haidary
Date: 9/23/2014 12:04:00 AM
Thank you for your support! I found very nice people here.
Date: 9/11/2014 3:24:00 PM
Sirat, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sirat Ahmad Haidary
Date: 9/13/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thank you very much, of course I will. Regards with love
Date: 9/11/2014 6:24:00 AM
Wow what a nice writing Sirat, Thumbs up... Nice imagery... god bless you Friend Always, Malik
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Sirat Ahmad Haidary
Date: 9/13/2014 9:50:00 AM
Thanks for you nice encouraging comment Mr. Malik Yaseen.
Date: 9/11/2014 5:20:00 AM
Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Sirat - A beautiful poem - thank you for sharing it with me - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sirat Ahmad Haidary
Date: 9/11/2014 5:36:00 AM
Dear Anne Lise Andresen! Thank you very much for you nice comment. English is not my first language but I try my best to write narratives and poems.
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