Moon Dust

Dust, astronauts found,
as fine as flour and 
rough as sandpaper:
meterorites crash -
and smash local rocks,

grey dust is formed -
abrasive dust;
it wears through boots,
clings to helmets,

magnetic,
static cling,
and toxic ,


plenty
of it

moon
dust

causes
sneezing,

gums up joints
in space suits -
can’t move arms,

sticks to visors
and cameras,
fills crew cabins
with bad dust storms,

dust suckers ‘hoover’, 
magnetic filters
pull  dust from the air,
and microwaves melt
dusty lunar soil.

For Catie’s contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/31/2012 12:45:00 PM
how u feeling this morning luv? it is evening here and probably there too ..
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Date: 3/30/2012 5:19:00 AM
I am wishing you the best in Catie'scontest Jack. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:09:00 PM
I like your realistic approach, Jack. I remember some of this stuff from when I researched it and then decided to go the romantic route. HOpe you do GREAT in the contest and thanks for your lovely comments today on my poems. Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/29/2012 9:08:00 PM
LoL, yes, that dust suckers 'hoover' is a killer. this is a great write jack, quite unique in form and content
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Date: 3/29/2012 2:07:00 PM
Very cool take on the theme, Jack!! You had me laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair when I saw the lline "dust sickers 'hoover.'" Guess it would take a vacuum to get up all of that pesky moon dust. Best wishes in Catie's contest! Love, carolyn
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