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Moon Dust

Dust, astronauts found, as fine as flour and rough as sandpaper: meterorites crash - and smash local rocks, grey dust is formed - abrasive dust; it wears through boots, clings to helmets, magnetic, static cling, and toxic , plenty of it moon dust causes sneezing, gums up joints in space suits - can’t move arms, sticks to visors and cameras, fills crew cabins with bad dust storms, dust suckers ‘hoover’, magnetic filters pull dust from the air, and microwaves melt dusty lunar soil. For Catie’s contest

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Date: 3/31/2012 12:45:00 PM
how u feeling this morning luv? it is evening here and probably there too ..
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Date: 3/30/2012 5:19:00 AM
I am wishing you the best in Catie'scontest Jack. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2012 10:09:00 PM
I like your realistic approach, Jack. I remember some of this stuff from when I researched it and then decided to go the romantic route. HOpe you do GREAT in the contest and thanks for your lovely comments today on my poems. Luv, andrea
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Date: 3/29/2012 9:08:00 PM
LoL, yes, that dust suckers 'hoover' is a killer. this is a great write jack, quite unique in form and content
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Date: 3/29/2012 2:07:00 PM
Very cool take on the theme, Jack!! You had me laughing so hard I almost fell out of my chair when I saw the lline "dust sickers 'hoover.'" Guess it would take a vacuum to get up all of that pesky moon dust. Best wishes in Catie's contest! Love, carolyn
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