Moon Beams Dance

Moon beams dance
   on bodies bare
Sun's rays glance
   off golden hair
Star shine winks
   at carefree whims
Breeze caresses
   long, lithe limbs

Universal forces
   all in sync
Lovers' arms
   forever linked
Stroll along
   endless sands
Whispers of
   promised lands
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Marcum Wong Avatar
July 19, 2019 at 9:23 PM
This is outstanding. In such brief lines it uplifts and inspires Gershon. It is going into my faves! xxoo : )
Wolf Avatar
July 20, 2019 at 10:38 PM
Thank you for making my day with your FAVE, Connie! :) gw
Y. Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 5:22 PM
Hi Gershon, I enjoyed this romantic write. Good content and imagery. I agree with John, it does have that ""classic" feel to it. Well done:-) Alexis
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 5:33 PM
I'm humbled by your comment. One aims for a 'classic feel,' and so often falls short... Thank you so, so much for this feedback, Alexis. Best wishes, Gershon
Hamilton Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 12:06 PM
This is a classic write Gershon, thanks for posting this romantic piece.
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 1:55 PM
John, thank you for the feedback and the praise for this sonnet. Deeply appreciated, Gershon
Mcgee Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 12:07 AM
You are writing a charmed life indeed. Love this one too!
Wolf Avatar
July 17, 2019 at 1:54 PM
Jeanne, your words are music to my ears. May sunshine and starlight come your way. Blessings, gw
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