Moon

Come now moon, Shine your light
Let me have some brightness tonight
Send me a star that I can borrow
And you can have it back tomorrow

Come now moon, Watch over me
Turn the tides that are drowning me
Please take me underneath your wing
And turn my winters into spring

Come now moon, I know you're there
For you always follow me everywhere
Please send down just one moonbeam
To turn my nightmares into dreams

Come now moon, Walk with me
With you around I am sure to see
A path somewhere that I can take
One on which my heart wont break

Come now moon, Before the day
Creeps in and chases you away
Please put the pieces of my soul
Back together and make me whole.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 6/6/2013 7:06:00 PM
Great writing here. I just dropped in and wonder why I haven't visited before... I do like the looks of your work.... Jake
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:37:00 PM
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Date: 4/25/2013 11:50:00 AM
This is really awesome! Simple and Sensitive!
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:41:00 PM
Jennifer, congratulations with the "From here to the moon and back " contest.... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 4/24/2013 7:18:00 PM
I really enjoyed this winning poem. Congratulations.
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Date: 4/24/2013 6:41:00 PM
Very nice lyrics and nice poem. Congrats on your win~A.O
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Date: 4/22/2013 9:22:00 PM
Very nice poem.
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Date: 4/19/2013 2:58:00 PM
Really great poem you have here :) I'm sort of new to poetry soup so if you find time maybe you wouldn't mind checking out some of my own?
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Date: 4/7/2013 5:45:00 PM
Very enjoyable poem. I love the 2nd stanza about the tides...great lines.
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Date: 4/7/2013 12:28:00 PM
Jennifer, this is a lovely poem. Enjoyed~ Thank you for sharing your poem. Have yourself a good one...Linda
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Date: 4/6/2013 9:34:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem with nice flow and rhyme. BG
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:56:00 PM
Jennifer, thank you for your fine "Moon" poem, nice to read. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/6/2013 5:46:00 PM
Very good piece. Really enjoyed your poem.
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