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Moon

wearing a white gown

of clouds moon looks like a bride •••

jasmine stars twinkle

~


03.08.2021

For
Constance La France
Favorite Nature Haiku

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Kenisha Shines

Date: 10/2/2021 8:48:00 AM

beautiful haiku!

Linda Milgate

Date: 10/1/2021 4:06:00 PM

lovely Haiku

Barb Gar

Date: 9/27/2021 6:57:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku. Enjoyed this one.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/20/2021 4:49:00 AM

Rama, can you ever forgive me for such a belated response to your POTD, I have so seldom been on Soup as our work pressures have increased so and my poetry has suffered. Thanks to Tom Cunningham and his always timeous wonderful comments i saw I got POTD and scrolled down to find yours dear friend congratulations-I'm sure you enjoyed the honor that day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/17/2021 3:31:00 PM

Congratulations, Rama. Beautiful haiku - "white gown of clouds" - stunning image! I would love to imagine Moon as a bride! BW ~ Mala

Ann Peck

Date: 9/12/2021 3:32:00 PM

Just lovely, Rama.

Marikate Kingston

Date: 9/12/2021 12:10:00 PM

This is a pretty Haiku poem. One of my favorite things is moonlight. There is a song called Moonlight in Vermont, that I learned when I lived there. My daughter will like this too. I'm glad I found it. Lovely.

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 8:32:00 PM

Rama, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/7/2021 5:18:00 PM

Heavenly! Congratulations dearest, Rama!

Alexis Y.

Date: 9/6/2021 12:44:00 PM

Hi Rama, This is just beautiful. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/6/2021 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. A "Beautiful" write. I Love This One. Have a blessed day............

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/6/2021 6:16:00 AM

Beautiful images you created, Rama. BIG congrats on poem of the day.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/6/2021 1:18:00 AM

My congratulations on your POTD. Verily a beautiful poem.

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 9/5/2021 9:07:00 PM

Rama, this haiku is exquisite! Congrats on POTD. Well deserved! Blessings, Jennifer

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/5/2021 8:10:00 PM

This is gorgeous, Mala . I don't know how I missed it earlier. Congrats and thanks again for the sweet blog.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/5/2021 7:08:00 PM

Wow! Amazing haiku, congrats on POTD, Rama!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/5/2021 6:23:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations, Rama on POTD!

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 9/6/2021 7:10:00 AM

Thanks Kim. How are you?

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/5/2021 1:41:00 PM

When clouds slightly cover the moon, it is such a breathtaking image to behold. Your thoughts hold beauty and a soft touch of romance. My heart is smiling. Congratulations Rama, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 9/6/2021 7:09:00 AM

Your comment brought a smile in my face. Wonder who the groom can possibly be. Thanks. Hope all is well with you