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Moon

wearing a white gown

of clouds moon looks like a bride •••

jasmine stars twinkle

~


03.08.2021

For
Constance La France
Favorite Nature Haiku

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Kenisha Shines

October 2, 2021 at 8:48 AM

beautiful haiku!

Linda Milgate

October 1, 2021 at 4:06 PM

lovely Haiku

Barb Gar

September 27, 2021 at 6:57 AM

Beautiful Haiku. Enjoyed this one.

Jennifer Proxenos

September 20, 2021 at 4:49 AM

Rama, can you ever forgive me for such a belated response to your POTD, I have so seldom been on Soup as our work pressures have increased so and my poetry has suffered. Thanks to Tom Cunningham and his always timeous wonderful comments i saw I got POTD and scrolled down to find yours dear friend congratulations-I'm sure you enjoyed the honor that day. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Malabika Ray Choudhury

September 17, 2021 at 3:31 PM

Congratulations, Rama. Beautiful haiku - "white gown of clouds" - stunning image! I would love to imagine Moon as a bride! BW ~ Mala

Ann Peck

September 12, 2021 at 3:32 PM

Just lovely, Rama.

Marikate Kingston

September 12, 2021 at 12:10 PM

This is a pretty Haiku poem. One of my favorite things is moonlight. There is a song called Moonlight in Vermont, that I learned when I lived there. My daughter will like this too. I'm glad I found it. Lovely.

Constance La France

September 8, 2021 at 8:32 PM

Rama, congratulations on your win in my Nature Haiku Contest with your beautiful Haiku, well done ~ love and serenity _ Constance

Demetrios Trifiatis

September 7, 2021 at 5:18 PM

Heavenly! Congratulations dearest, Rama!

Alexis Y.

September 6, 2021 at 12:44 PM

Hi Rama, This is just beautiful. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Paula Goldsmith

September 6, 2021 at 7:24 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Few words with much said. A "Beautiful" write. I Love This One. Have a blessed day............

Vijay Pandit

September 6, 2021 at 6:16 AM

Beautiful images you created, Rama. BIG congrats on poem of the day.

Victor Buhagiar

September 6, 2021 at 1:18 AM

My congratulations on your POTD. Verily a beautiful poem.

Jennifer Fenn

September 5, 2021 at 9:07 PM

Rama, this haiku is exquisite! Congrats on POTD. Well deserved! Blessings, Jennifer

Andrea Dietrich

September 5, 2021 at 8:10 PM

This is gorgeous, Mala . I don't know how I missed it earlier. Congrats and thanks again for the sweet blog.

Unseeking Seeker

September 5, 2021 at 7:08 PM

Wow! Amazing haiku, congrats on POTD, Rama!

Kim Rodrigues

September 5, 2021 at 6:23 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations, Rama on POTD!

Rama Balasubramanian

September 6, 2021 at 7:10 AM

Thanks Kim. How are you?

Brandy Nicole

September 5, 2021 at 1:41 PM

When clouds slightly cover the moon, it is such a breathtaking image to behold. Your thoughts hold beauty and a soft touch of romance. My heart is smiling. Congratulations Rama, on Poem of the Day. :) Brandy

Rama Balasubramanian

September 6, 2021 at 7:09 AM

Your comment brought a smile in my face. Wonder who the groom can possibly be. Thanks. Hope all is well with you