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Montage of a Tree

Tonight, a montage is brushed with a splendor of glazed branches : an arrangement of russet teal and orange; dappled wisps enticing my spirit for a pilgrim beyond my own angst. In pure delight, tendrils of leaves are aflame through the glory of a varnished summer. Feathery rims unfurl in dotted patterns adorning a cherry tree with iridescent flush as its arms seem to layout the stencils of hours' burdens. Yet, miniature stars flicker on its garment this cherry timber blowing heavenward, perhaps content in the grace of its caressed shade and bloomed fruitage; enough to guard men from rainfall and sun. I nestle on the ground, searching for its beauty, and feeling its silence: a renewed breath heaves from petals born in earth's clay ,sewn by nature's hands; ever- entrancing and evergreen. ................... Brian Strand's Whitsun Premiere Contest

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Date: 5/25/2017 8:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win Nette
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Date: 2/15/2017 11:21:00 PM
I always love to read your poetry, Nette. This poem has such rich, beautiful imagery...love, love, love it! Congrats and hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 2/15/2017 8:06:00 PM
Congratulations Nette: You have painted an enchanting picture of a tree. Love the imagery. I can't wait for our summer growth to come back. The winter branches are interesting but there is nothing like lush green leaves. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 2/15/2017 9:39:00 AM
just beautiful Nette-lovely imagery and rhythm at it's best--- thank you and congrats- (soupie) :) -luloo
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Date: 6/11/2016 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on a wonderful win, Nette:) I'm unable to enter your new contest too:( same error: request timed out:(
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:53:00 AM
Congrats on your placement Nette, well done...
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Date: 6/11/2016 6:47:00 AM
Fantastic poem,congratulations Nette!
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Date: 6/11/2016 5:45:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Nette
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Date: 6/11/2016 12:20:00 AM
Nette, Thank you for entering my contest 'ct
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Date: 5/21/2016 6:10:00 PM
simply gorgeous, Nette. I predict a WIN.
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Date: 5/21/2016 11:59:00 AM
An assemblage of vivid words that captures a tranquil scene " ever entrancing." You create brilliant poems!
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Date: 5/21/2016 10:10:00 AM
Lovely poem, reading the verse's very soothing. Its so nice to read a poem,that just makes you feel at peace and relaxed!
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Date: 5/21/2016 2:26:00 AM
Delightful description of scenery with masterful expressions dear, nette! A seven.
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Date: 5/21/2016 2:21:00 AM
Soup mail. Your poem is enchanting Nette. You always write with such beautiful imagery. I love trees and you have created a lovely tribute to them in this amazing poem! #7 ;)
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