Monsters Fear Me

Monsters Fear Me

The evil hand of Darkland stayed my play
punishing innocence in a most cruel way
Deep were the slashes cut into my back
No charm did I have to stop this attack
when unearthly monster crossed my track

Midnight Sun lit its fierce green eyes
flames belched forth from darkened skies
Roars so deep trees trembled in dismay
This creature came to kill not to play
would I live to see another sunny day

Tall as the mighty oak trees it stood
nothing about it nice, nothing good
Slime laden scales oozing out foul odor
Chills sent up my spine so much colder
would have ran had I been much older

Nothing to do but chant my power song
pray my courage lasted out that long
A bold cry to Skylord to quickly smite
This massive monster on this dark night
then hope for a searing hot beam of light

Seconds ticked on like hours dripping by
where was the Skylord's life saving reply
As my last desperate hope started to fail
Lightning bolt blasted that monster to hell
now live I to rejoice and so happily tell

Thanks given out for my song being heard
faith in goodness, faith in his mighty word
No evil dared again to attack God's child
My heart so strong, my spirit still so wild
Monsters fear me even when I am this mild

10-09-2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 10/17/2014 9:20:00 AM
Congrats to your win Robert! :-)
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Date: 10/14/2014 10:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Robert.
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Date: 10/14/2014 9:41:00 PM
Dark write but enjoyable one, Robert, congrats
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Date: 10/14/2014 12:00:00 PM
Dark and emotional write Robert:-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 10/12/2014 5:34:00 PM
Thanks Carol and Harry. I am writing primarily dark stuff this month...
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Date: 10/11/2014 12:29:00 PM
A very interesting write!
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Date: 10/10/2014 4:06:00 PM
Wow, some poem this is,, i like the message, also.
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Date: 10/10/2014 1:39:00 PM
Monster title, Monster poetry Robert. I so hope a contest appears that requires what you've written. Like music, I know what makes me like, the hairs on my arms rise. I'm with Anne Lise on this one. I so hope you know what you've created, absolute Poetry, Mr Lindley. Your poetry buddy James, wishing you & yours a lovely weekend :)
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Date: 10/10/2014 12:28:00 PM
- There is so much to be afraid of today - but we must have the courage to live - Courage is not the absence of fear, but the ability to move on even though you are afraid - A fantastic well written poem, Robert - Puts the large rate at this !!! - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:47:00 PM
Thank you Gry... Will check your work soon..
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:43:00 PM
Oh, I like this dark and emotional piece too, +++ for great rhyming. Your poem makes me think of the fairy tales I heard as a child, of Stephen King novels, the fight between evil and good, the fights we battle with ourself........ I enjoyed this, it also goes well with the season and the Halloween spirit.
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Date: 10/9/2014 10:29:00 PM
Robert . . . You're a man after my most macabre heart, feelings, and dark emotions. A most outstanding write here my good friend in every respect. And a most outstanding "7" as well, and I've saved it as a FAV. I got another one of my horrific poetic writes currently under construction for near-future release. Again, a most fabulous piece here!! Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/9/2014 10:32:00 PM
Thank you my friend.. I look forward to reading your work!!! Dazzle us with some dark stuff!!!
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