Monsoon Night

Over rolling hills, it tiptoes in on bobcat feet
With Lynx-like eyes, and billowing clouds of gray
And turns the hush of twilight's blood red sky
Into a witches brew, alive with piercing cries
A wind that coils in the breast of dunes
Gliding in from distant lands, Saguaro sands
Eerie sounds whistle through window sills
The chill of what was peaceful and still
Has turned to anger, fear and dread
Wildness arrives on chariots with mighty steeds
The monsoon thrives, while a desert blanches dead
It gnashes teeth with biting winds
Shaking shingles, tree trunks bend
The pouring thunder, lightning peels
Rain gushes down as strong as steel
We wait until the wrath is spent
At last with gusto,....a final vent
Like spoiled child it takes a bow
There's nothing but a murmur now
The wretched carpet left behind
Broken wings from dark of night
Trees and limbs are battered hosts
Cacti lift their arms to toast
The remnant of a monsoon's ghost


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Inspired by Paula's Monsoon Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/15/2010 9:24:00 AM
Great write...Love the descriptiveness and expressiveness in this one..Should do well in the contest heading for the winners' circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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Date: 6/15/2010 3:49:00 AM
What a fine images bobcat feet and lenx-like eyes and wind coiling in the breast of dunes. Good luck in the contest, Carrie
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Date: 6/14/2010 7:59:00 PM
'On bobcat feet with Lynx-like eyes', huh?...I see you have not lost your touch, my friend! And that last line?...Whew! - Tim
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Date: 6/14/2010 6:32:00 PM
A delightful verse you have so carefully penned. The mood fits its wrath, I truly enjoyed this read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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