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Monoku - Flowers Have Souls Too



rose weeps   "my worst nightmare is that I will end my life in a vase . . . " 

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August 19, 2016


Poetry/Monoku/Personification/flowers have souls too
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For the contest, monoku madness
sponsor, John Hamilton

Second Place

flowerhumormonoku

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Kim Rodrigues

August 23, 2016 at 10:56 PM

I like it!

Joseph May

August 23, 2016 at 9:02 PM

Congrats on your win Broken Wings

Beautiful Scars

August 23, 2016 at 4:06 PM

Broken Wings, very sad and touching, perfect for you...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Jan Allison

August 22, 2016 at 3:47 PM

I can hear almost the rose sobbing Constance - super poem:-)hugs Jan xx

Sara Chansarkar

August 22, 2016 at 9:43 AM

Can believe you to hear flower's laments Broken!Congrats on your win!

Paul Callus

August 22, 2016 at 9:25 AM

The pained soul of a personified rose...beautiful monoku, Constance. Congratulations on this high flying win. Regards // paul

Connie Marcum Wong

August 22, 2016 at 7:05 AM

Oh really clever Constance. I see why this placed high! Congratulations! 7 ; )

Just James

August 22, 2016 at 1:21 AM

Sweet write great win

Eve Roper

August 21, 2016 at 8:51 PM

Oh perfect monoku, Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

August 21, 2016 at 8:15 PM

oh this is so cool. A great metaphor, Constance and big congrats.

Sandra Haight

August 21, 2016 at 7:26 PM

Broken Wings, congratulations on your fine win in the Monoku contest! Great personification! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.

August 21, 2016 at 4:38 PM

Hi BW, What a good one liner. Congratulations on your fine win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

John Hamilton

August 21, 2016 at 4:04 PM

This one caught me by surprise I can usually detect your style instantly, but I guess with one line not so much! This was just what I was looking for great personification! Thanks for a class entry!

Vladislav Raven

August 21, 2016 at 1:38 PM

Hi Constance, Yes, the rose would have this worry. This is such a beautiful Monoku. The stately rose, the bush itself shall always be, giving new blooms for those taken so it shall ever be. Foe the bush to die, that would be the sadness. It's blooms whared between lover's it would allow and have joy, at least i believe this. Your heart ever beats Love as does your rose, it shall never be found in a vase. Your rose ever shines in our hearts. This has to be a seven. Good luck. Love,,,,Mike, XX

Duke Beaufort

August 19, 2016 at 2:57 PM

Hopefully, you will never be cut off from the wonders of life. I wish I could redo the order of the universe sometimes. When I think of that, I also may think of you because of what you endured and how you express yourself about it. I hope you will have joy from every experience today and tomorrow. Pleasant wishes to you!