Monoku 5 - Twilight

Monoku 5 - Twilight come to me twilight... become night’s silver full moon Written 12.04.2013

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/11/2013 9:40:00 AM

it is beautiful, Jack.... LINDA

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/11/2013 9:48:00 AM

As always, thank you for reading my work... Jack

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/8/2013 3:53:00 PM

I read this again and liked it even MORE

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2013 6:18:00 PM

another beauty!! I sure am struggling for the perfect monoku for that one contest.

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/5/2013 8:16:00 PM

They aren't exactly easy. Seems like they would be. After all, it's just one line. I'm looking forwards to reading yours...

Joseph Sergi

Date: 12/5/2013 5:55:00 PM

Jack you do have a true talent with the Haiku!!

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/5/2013 8:17:00 PM

Thanks again, Joseph... Jack

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/5/2013 1:43:00 PM

Beautiful. BG

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/5/2013 2:03:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara... Jack

Poet Tacito

Date: 12/5/2013 10:02:00 AM

Fantastic! Embrace the moonlit nights and its depth!

Jack Jordan
Date: 12/5/2013 12:25:00 PM

Thanks Drake, as always... Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/5/2013 3:31:00 AM

- Beautiful, haiku Jack - you will get 4 from me :) - Not as nice as yours ... - oxox // Anne-Lise :)