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Monoku 3 - Air

like life-giving air ~ she breathes in your male essence and exhales virtue



Written 12/31/17
Contest:  Monoku 3
Hosted by Silent One

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Gregory Richard Barden

January 4, 2018 at 10:35 PM

Wonderful Monoku, Rhoda - Happy New Year and congratulations on your win, my friend - well-deserved! :-)

Rhoda Tripp

January 5, 2018 at 4:25 AM

Garsh. Thank you, Gregory. I'm humbled, my Dear.

Edward Mccall

January 4, 2018 at 12:07 PM

Congrats on a great win my friend well deserved to be sure.

Rhoda Tripp

January 5, 2018 at 4:24 AM

Awww. Thank you, Edward.

Eve Roper

January 3, 2018 at 12:32 AM

Congratulations on your win, Rhoda, great monoku. Hugs Eve ~`*

Rhoda Tripp

January 3, 2018 at 9:00 AM

Awww. Thank you so much Eve. Hugs

Line Gauthier

January 2, 2018 at 9:39 AM

Well done, Rhoda. Congrats on your win.

Rhoda Tripp

January 2, 2018 at 1:07 PM

Thank you, Line.

John Gondolf

January 2, 2018 at 8:58 AM

Back to say congrats, my friend. Keep exhaling that virtue...

Rhoda Tripp

January 2, 2018 at 1:07 PM

Lol. Thank you, John. Virttuuuueeeeee......

Probir Gupta

January 2, 2018 at 5:27 AM

Lovely and warm, Rhoda ... Congratulations on your happy win ...

Rhoda Tripp

January 2, 2018 at 1:06 PM

Thank you, Probir!

Barry Stebbings

January 2, 2018 at 3:27 AM

Congratulations on your win with this one, Rhoda,

Rhoda Tripp

January 2, 2018 at 1:06 PM

Thank you, Barry!

Paul Callus

January 1, 2018 at 5:00 PM

Lovely to see you climbing the ladder of success, Rhoda:) Pleased to be back with congratulations!! Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 5:16 PM

Paul, my Dear, success is dependent upon whom be the teacher. This be why I started following your account when I started on the Soup. I knew that if I found a talented mentor, I could become educated in the art of poetry. I chose you. You have not let me down. Thank you.

Susan Ashley

January 1, 2018 at 4:45 PM

Rhonda such an enticing monoku. Congratulations for your wonderful win with your excellent poem.. ~Susan

Rhoda Tripp

January 3, 2018 at 9:01 AM

Actually, it's my second, second.

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 4:54 PM

Thank you so much, Susan. I was very happy to hear of my placement. My first second. lol.

Andrea Dietrich

January 1, 2018 at 3:49 PM

Back with congrats for ya, and a happy new year 2018

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 4:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. I am so pleased with my placement. It's a great way to begin a new year. Thank you very much for your support

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 1, 2018 at 12:45 PM

- Congratulations on your great 2nd place in the contest, Rhoda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 2:31 PM

Awwww...garsh...I'm so humbled. It's my highest placement yet. I'm so excited! Thank you.

Silent One

January 1, 2018 at 12:15 PM

Great image... Great one liner Rhoda..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 2:30 PM

Seriously? Cool! I'm so happy right now! (Does a happy dance, twirls in circles, and highfives my daughter) Thank you!

Paul Callus

January 1, 2018 at 7:44 AM

Metaphorically beautiful, creative and sensual, Rhoda. In my books, a sure winner:) Regards // paul

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 10:46 AM

Thank you, Paul. You are very kind.

Viv Wigley

January 1, 2018 at 2:00 AM

Nicely done, Rhoda, should do well. Viv x

Rhoda Tripp

January 1, 2018 at 10:46 AM

Thank you, Viv. Happy New Year.

Andrea Dietrich

December 31, 2017 at 7:26 PM

wow, what a great metaphor, Rhoda. Sure to do well in Silent One's contest.

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 9:04 PM

Thank you, Andrea, Dear. Happy New Year

Anne-Lise Andresen

December 31, 2017 at 12:00 PM

- Well done, Rhonda - Luck in the contest - Happy New Year - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 1:55 PM

Thank you, Sunshine. Happy New Year and double the hugs in return. (I'm one upping lol)

James Swartz

December 31, 2017 at 10:02 AM

That's my kind of lady! Great write Rhoda!

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 1:56 PM

Happy New Year as well!

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 1:53 PM

I changed the "I" to "she" because I got scared. Lmao. (Such a chicken, I am.) So anyways, thank you for the compliment. Ha! Virtuueeeeee

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

December 31, 2017 at 8:21 AM

Sultry penning Rhoda! Love it :) my best to you! xomo

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 1:51 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen. Happy New Year. XOMO (not sure what that means but I'm sending it back). Lol

Arturo Michael

December 31, 2017 at 7:49 AM

She's powerful... and a powerful monoku too...All the best Rhoda

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 1:48 PM

Thank you kindly, Arturo. Happy New Year, Dear.

Vijay Pandit

December 31, 2017 at 7:49 AM

Very potent one liner..nicely done, Rhoda.

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 1:49 PM

Thank you, Vijay for your support of my writing. Happy New Year.

Kim Rodrigues

December 31, 2017 at 6:42 AM

Must be quite a man. Nice.

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 6:49 AM

Yes. One would think. Lol. Thanks, Kim. Happy New Year.

John Gondolf

December 31, 2017 at 6:32 AM

Rhoda, this has a very subtle sense of sensuality to it, very nice. Happy new year to you and yours! John

John Gondolf

December 31, 2017 at 6:57 AM

You, shy??? I don’t see that...

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 6:39 AM

Thank you, Dear. I got a little shy and changed "I" to "she". Lol.

Joseph May

December 31, 2017 at 5:53 AM

Very nicely expressed Rhoda...Happy New Year!

Rhoda Tripp

December 31, 2017 at 6:02 AM

Thank you, Joseph. Happy New Year to you as well!

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