Monoku

a small white wild flower smiles in the flower bed ~ i water that too 

Date: 09th July 2022
Contest: The art of peace poetry contest 
Sponsored by:John Lawless

1st place winner of the contest judged on 16th July 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Kelii Kekaula Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 1:57 PM
A backdoor opens anew -- Rasitha, pensive penning! Compliments on your righteous win my friend, Aloha~William
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 20, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Great to see you are enjoying the poem, William. Wish you a blessed day and thank you for the encouraging comment.
Agustin Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 9:50 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... delightful and delighting from the start 'til the end. God bless you.
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 10:09 PM
Extremely happy that you are enjoying the poem, Beata. God bless you too and thanks for the comment.
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:13 PM
Incredible monoku. Big congrats
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 8:55 AM
Thank you very much for your great appreciation, Dear Andrea
Sambourne Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 6:01 PM
What a remarkable image in a creatively original Monoku. Many congratulations! Brian
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Thank you so much enjoying the poem and encouraging words, Brian :)
Ranaweera  Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:40 AM
I am back to Congratulate you on your Top Win!!
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Thank you very much for your great appreciation. I'm truly happy.
Peck Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 9:01 AM
That's so lovely, Rasitha. Congratulations on First Place!
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 10:41 AM
Thank you very much for your great appreciation, Dear Ann.
Faulkner Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 8:51 AM
Let's hope more smiling white flowers are found! Congratulations on your win~
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 10:42 AM
Yes. Peace for everybody. Appreciate your comment, Michelle.
Y. Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 8:42 AM
Congratulations on your top win, it was well deserved. Have a good weekend:-) Alexis
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 10:44 AM
Thank you very much for your great appreciation and you too :), Alexis.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Have a great/blessed day.......................
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 15, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Thank you very much for your great appreciation, Paula. It's truly encouraging. Wish you a blessed day too.
Ranaweera  Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 9:36 PM
A great monoku with natural imagery and euphonic sound effect. I love its social message, too.
Ranasinghe Avatar
July 12, 2022 at 12:31 AM
Thank you very much for your generous comment. Appreciate it.
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