Monoku-Out of the Blue

upon the breeze a parachute show - dent de lion disperse to & fro

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Sean Kelly

Date: 11/18/2008 8:14:00 AM

Thank you , this ps win came , out of the blue .... Good job ,you sponsored , or NONE of us would have won... Adress; "Montserrat" , Newtown Hill ,Tramore , Waterford ... Thanks again ...

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/22/2008 11:11:00 AM

Congrats Brian on your Poiema Chapbook! Anyone in their right mind would pay for your work. Of course you are doing something right silly! Well Brian, you seem to see the world more brilliantly than most, and sorry but I could not navigate well to find your stuff on the blogspot site. Yes - please let me know when you do about the basil. Have a great weekend! Love, Shar

Sharon Winter

Date: 7/31/2008 10:22:00 AM

Ok, had to look this one up. Always learning something new and incredibly interesting. Amazing how much I don't know. A lovely vision! Love, Shar