Monoku-In My Common Place Book

a litter of scraps - collaged from my past

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L'Nass Shango

Date: 5/20/2009 7:35:00 AM

We are all patchwork of a fragmented history ... collage are prettier for their many colors ... look out Joseph ... the dreamer cometh!

Sharon Winter

Date: 5/19/2009 8:29:00 AM

Once again you have captured such truth many can relate to! Two short lines, just unbelievable. Love, Shar

Lena Townsend

Date: 5/19/2009 6:29:00 AM

Brilliant writing as always. I have a book with scraps of my past and dreams for the future as well my name for it is not so brilliant as I call it my book of self-expression. It is a collage of all the things that make me who and what I am. Very creative. Smiles from Lolita

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/19/2009 6:24:00 AM

Another winning poem....something we can all relate to....scraps of our past. ~ Love, Carrie....(thank you for all your kind comments, Brian!)

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/19/2009 4:14:00 AM

wow! you are creative! Brian! Jim

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/19/2009 12:32:00 AM

Now this I can totally relate to - Love your work, God Bless, MJ