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Monoku- In the Church

in the church I prayed and wept for my dead sister- an angel whispers . . . _____________________________ January 24, 2019 Poetry/Monoku/in the church Copyright Protected, ID 19-1107-878-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Heavenly Monoku sponsor, Kim Rodrigues Second Place

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Paul Callus

Date: 2/2/2019 8:20:00 AM

A lovely and touching one-liner, Constance; I am moved beyond words. Congratulations on your podium finish. Regards // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/1/2019 6:34:00 PM

Congrats, Constance. i really like yours a lot!

Sandra Haight

Date: 1/31/2019 5:00:00 PM

Very sad, yet comforting and well-written, Constance. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra

Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2019 5:54:00 PM

Sandra, thanks so much for the congratulations ~

Eve Roper

Date: 1/31/2019 12:12:00 PM

Great inspirational Monoku, Dear Heart. Congratulations on your win. ~`* Eve

Constance La France
Date: 1/31/2019 5:55:00 PM

Eve, thank you for the congratulations ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/30/2019 6:06:00 PM

Hi BW, This is such a comfortable piece. Congratulations on your 2nd place:-)Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2019 6:18:00 PM

Alexis, thanks for the visit and the congratulations ~

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2019 4:47:00 PM

A comfort... Congrats on your win!

Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2019 6:18:00 PM

Kim, thanks for the contest and for my placement ~

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/30/2019 3:58:00 PM

haunting scene and image, heaven-blessed. Congrats on your win in Kim's contest! :) gw

Constance La France
Date: 1/30/2019 6:17:00 PM

Gershon, thanks for the congrats and the comment~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/27/2019 3:11:00 PM

great jux at the end, Constance. Good one!

Constance La France
Date: 1/28/2019 7:29:00 AM

Andrea, thanks for the visit and the compliment ~

Caycay Jennings

Date: 1/25/2019 4:37:00 AM

lovely and touching. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 7:36:00 AM

CayCay, thank you for the comment and poetry hug~

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/25/2019 4:07:00 AM

Hi Constance, such a beautiful Monoku. CA Heavenly thought indeed. The words touch the heart. Wishing you all the best in the contest. Hugs....Mike. XX

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 7:35:00 AM

Mike, thanks for that beautiful comment and the hugs of of course ~

Bobby May

Date: 1/24/2019 8:31:00 PM

That is beautiful want to trade, lol

Constance La France
Date: 1/25/2019 7:35:00 AM

Bobby, thanks for the beautiful, no I think I will keep mine even if it fails in the contest ~