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MONOCHROME © Sara Etgen-Baker 2025
Sun slowly descends, and the world turns monochrome, like a black and white drawing on the Creator’s easel. I patiently wait for night with its renewing spirit. Nightfall serves as a metaphorical curtain closure, while dawn symbolizes a daily reopening, with the birds serenading harmoniously on cue.
dusk whispers, night falls, shadows stretch across the sky— day’s breath vanishes dawn’s silent embrace cradles the fragile and bold a promise of hope

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Date: 7/17/2025 4:31:00 PM
Your descriptions of dusk and dawn were eloquently written, Sara. Bill
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Sara Baker
Date: 7/17/2025 4:38:00 PM
thank you, dear hubby, for your visit and kind comments, hugs
Date: 7/17/2025 6:03:00 AM
I wanted to visit one of your haibuns. Short but sweet. Great haikus Sara
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Date: 7/17/2025 4:38:00 PM
thank you, Tom. I appreciate your stopping by and for your ongoing support

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