Get Your Premium Membership

Money

computers have no children to feed or rent to pay or place to sleep machines don't buy food or wear clothes or go to concerts or plays i've never seen an invention go on vacation or put money in a church metal and wood they use to help us work what happened to the flow of life giving blood of our world is it somewhere in a bank somewhere in gold the laziest thing on earth metal and cold no feelings about christmas or people that's cold value? all it is, is a number it's not feeding anyone but taking us under if the gold don't start moving we'll have a communist revolt kill all the rich men and take their gold their machines their inventions their contracts their polititions and their souls to places the sun don't shine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/5/2009 4:49:00 PM
hot one!
Login to Reply
Date: 12/2/2009 5:45:00 AM
unbelievable!
Login to Reply
Date: 11/30/2009 6:32:00 PM
thanks for the smile!! It did brighten my day!! smiles back to you!!:-D
Login to Reply
Date: 11/26/2009 6:02:00 AM
Thankxxx John for your wonderful comments on my poetry and u enjoy your Turkey Day .. I am in Pittsburgh visiting my brother and his significant other so he let me use his computer to say hi to my Soup Family... blessings ... luv... had to read your great write again.. "Sweetie"
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2009 7:30:00 PM
Yes computers are cold with no feelings but we are human with emotion and feelings. Computers are cold you are just a number on some keys. But we are people and we do not want to be just another number in this world. Like this one John. Have a Happy Thanksgiving my friend. Love and Blessings Phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 11/25/2009 4:07:00 PM
hi my friend John, it is good to read you again, this is a great one my friend, thank you for your kind comments, I hope all is well with you my friend, take care D-nyce
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 7:01:00 PM
Hi John, I've been patiently waiting for another poem from you and here you are. Enjoyed your poem. Alot of truth in it. Also enjoyed Sara's Thumping gizzards comment. : ) Good to see you writing again.God bless. -Robert
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 6:49:00 PM
John u sound angry in this poem but its so very true .. this world is going to the pit below ... and I think everything we know has now gone overseas... excellent poetry tonight for me to read... blessings ... luv .. happy turkey day, John ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 5:31:00 PM
All true Sir,....and they might get my computer,..but there is nothing else !!! Great write ! james
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 5:10:00 PM
robin hood? keep sharing, I have seen alot of good works today yours included.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 4:27:00 PM
I posted a new poem.on the wings of an angel.check it out.
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 2:25:00 PM
good message indeed...lets kill all the rich men:),,no,lets just pray we all learn to share much more,,love the message here John..Charma
Login to Reply
Date: 11/24/2009 1:25:00 PM
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Machines don't have a heart as some people don't have one they just have a thumping gizzard. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry