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Monet- Madame Monet- And- Child

One little sidestep off the beaten track, 
Is a colorful garden of dazzling shades,
With blood red geraniums of scintillating hue
Interspersed by those of white and baby pink,
Where beauty sings mysteriously, 
Reigning in every theme, a place of bliss
Where silence speaks for itself,
Where bees are the only intruders, I suppose. 
A place to feast the eyes and relax,
Reminding one of the Garden of Eden!

At its center is someone, in blossoming beauty. 
Not sure if she is sitting on the edge of a boulder,
Or simply crouching on the carpet of grass, 
Or is it a statue set up amid the array of flowers?

An angelic form so intent on what she does,
Lost to the world, her face bent, 
But eyes moving up and down,
In tandem with the sewing needle in hand.
Is she stitching a frock for her little girl, 
Sitting close to her mother’s feet?
A starlet fallen from the night sky,
Or a cherubim dropped down from heaven’s height,
In flowing azure blue frock with golden hair.
She too, like her mother, is so absorbed,
Pouring her soul in to the open book in her lap.

May be a ploy employed by the mother,
Not to disturb her in her work. 

Oh, vagrant winds, come not close,
To disturb the tranquility of the two
Wholly sinking into what they are doing.
Kindly veer in another direction
And don’t interrupt their solitude!

April.22. 2023
A Brian Strand Premiere . No1210 Poetry Contest


This is based on Claude Monet's famous painting- Madame- Monet-and-child, where he has pictured his wife Camille and child in his garden.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Wolf Avatar
April 26, 2023 at 7:51 PM
My first 'impression' of this one. (Never saw it before). Nicely done, Valsa!
Daniel Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 10:12 PM
Wonderful description, Valsa, of a beautiful painting:)
Y. Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 11:58 AM
Wow! Valsa, Your muse caused you to write such a well-written poem based on the renowned painting. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a nice day;-) Alexis
Goldsmith Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 10:38 AM
A lovely write/picture. Love Both. Good Luck. Have a blessed day..............
Dietrich Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 8:09 AM
I never saw this painting before, but you sure do portray it well . Beautiful.
Kendrick Avatar
April 23, 2023 at 2:05 AM
I am sure Brian will enjoy this one. A beautiful painting for sure. I enjoyed reading your contest entry. I enjoy the colors he used. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Faulkner Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 8:23 PM
This is so angelic and innocent, just like the painting, so full of the imagery of his love for them~
Turner Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 10:01 AM
Great description, Valsa. Sadly Camile, the woman and his wife, died a year later from tuberculosis. A very good read:)
McBride  Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Beautiful scenery with poem and picture, what a blessing to read today : ). Love the simple treasures of motherly bonding portrayed, peaceful, serenity,love and joy,
Pandit Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 5:41 AM
You paint a painting with your words, Valsa. Wonderfully descriptive of the renowned artist's treasured work. Best to you my friend.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:09 AM
You have not lost your knack for description and painting such wonderful colors.
George Avatar
April 22, 2023 at 4:21 AM
Thank you so much dear Victor for your encouraging comment. It was with great apprehension that I posted it.... my maiden attempt.
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