Doris Culverhouse Poet Free verse

Monday

News Headlines:  Rude Becky, Iris, and Lily abducted....kidnapping!!

Mercy upon my soul....buried alive rude Becky, Iris and Lily
Never shall my sin be found as long as their feet stay planted
Their sin is an age old calamity.... being too beautiful!

Keep my secret....if you know
Lethal injection is not the way to go!!

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Debbie Duncan August 2, 2012 at 6:17 PM great poem ,,,,, I wrote one on this subject called " dark woods" ,,,,,, thank you for reading my " lovers quarrel" blessings Doris ;}

Elizabeth Wesley April 1, 2012 at 1:40 PM Not your usual style Doris, a mystery you give and I ponder the inner workings of this trio of women. I think the lethal injection idea is not a bad idea for the incorrigible.

Carolyn Devonshire March 31, 2012 at 12:06 PM Sometimes people who are very handsome or beautiful seem to cast aspersions on those of lesser means. Very interesting poem, Doris. (I'd take the lethal injection over the electric chair, but I guess rude Becky, Iris and Lily had no choice. This poem reminds me of my rich sister. I LOVE it! Love, carolyn

Daver Austin March 31, 2012 at 11:43 AM Sounds like rotten neighbors to me. I'll bet they played rock music very loud at 3:00 in the morning and all rode motorcycles up and down the block. Good going, Doris. The world is a better place now. Very entertaining write. Love, daver

Joe Maverick March 28, 2012 at 3:13 PM I "gather" these are flower types Doris..) have been pleased to read your poem so i shall have to say.."thanks a bunch" L O L...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 27, 2012 at 10:13 PM Your secret is safe on the Soup! Great poem, Doris...very creative. Thanks for all your kind comments today. I'm sorry to say I don't know who the artist of the painting is with my "Devotion" poem. I went back to look and of course, I can't find it. If I do , I will let you know. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2012 at 10:01 PM Doris, wow... this reminds me of many stories out there.. some..peeps... never think... this needs more...love it...pd

Andrea Dietrich March 27, 2012 at 9:01 PM hahaha. what a fantasy to be rid of that rude trio! Kidnapping AND murder. Sounds like a plot to be explored!!!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair March 27, 2012 at 6:27 PM Great job..and such a nice read, jag

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2012 at 12:06 PM Like this poem Doris and I will keep your secret. - :) oxox Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick March 27, 2012 at 8:54 AM Rudbeckia will sent out rizones down the hill and sound the alarm..Haiku I read in one place is the plural and there is another word for the singular of it but this morning I read that it is singular and plural for in Japanese that don't have singular or plural nouns..Who knows..Maybe someone from Japan could tell us..Mom

Kathryn Collins March 27, 2012 at 8:32 AM lusciously lascivious. Kathy

Chittaranjan Dey March 27, 2012 at 7:38 AM wow.......incredible and very strong headlines, like this style.