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News Headlines: Rude Becky, Iris, and Lily abducted....kidnapping!! Mercy upon my soul....buried alive rude Becky, Iris and Lily Never shall my sin be found as long as their feet stay planted Their sin is an age old calamity.... being too beautiful! Keep my secret....if you know Lethal injection is not the way to go!!

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/2/2012 6:17:00 PM

great poem ,,,,, I wrote one on this subject called " dark woods" ,,,,,, thank you for reading my " lovers quarrel" blessings Doris ;}

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 4/1/2012 1:40:00 PM

Not your usual style Doris, a mystery you give and I ponder the inner workings of this trio of women. I think the lethal injection idea is not a bad idea for the incorrigible.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2012 12:06:00 PM

Sometimes people who are very handsome or beautiful seem to cast aspersions on those of lesser means. Very interesting poem, Doris. (I'd take the lethal injection over the electric chair, but I guess rude Becky, Iris and Lily had no choice. This poem reminds me of my rich sister. I LOVE it! Love, carolyn

Daver Austin

Date: 3/31/2012 11:43:00 AM

Sounds like rotten neighbors to me. I'll bet they played rock music very loud at 3:00 in the morning and all rode motorcycles up and down the block. Good going, Doris. The world is a better place now. Very entertaining write. Love, daver

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/28/2012 3:13:00 PM

I "gather" these are flower types Doris..) have been pleased to read your poem so i shall have to say.."thanks a bunch" L O L...

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/27/2012 10:13:00 PM

Your secret is safe on the Soup! Great poem, Doris...very creative. Thanks for all your kind comments today. I'm sorry to say I don't know who the artist of the painting is with my "Devotion" poem. I went back to look and of course, I can't find it. If I do , I will let you know. Blessings, Rhonda

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/27/2012 10:01:00 PM

Doris, wow... this reminds me of many stories out there.. some..peeps... never think... this needs more...love it...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/27/2012 9:01:00 PM

hahaha. what a fantasy to be rid of that rude trio! Kidnapping AND murder. Sounds like a plot to be explored!!!

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 3/27/2012 6:27:00 PM

Great job..and such a nice read, jag

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2012 12:06:00 PM

Like this poem Doris and I will keep your secret. - :) oxox Anne-Lise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/27/2012 8:54:00 AM

Rudbeckia will sent out rizones down the hill and sound the alarm..Haiku I read in one place is the plural and there is another word for the singular of it but this morning I read that it is singular and plural for in Japanese that don't have singular or plural nouns..Who knows..Maybe someone from Japan could tell us..Mom

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/27/2012 8:32:00 AM

lusciously lascivious. Kathy

Chittaranjan Dey

Date: 3/27/2012 7:38:00 AM

wow.......incredible and very strong headlines, like this style.