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My love, I cherish Your words Your thoughts Your soft lips My love I cherish the walks The soft winds of fall le jardin, L'eau The flowers in bloom The cafes and cloudy skies Madeleine, columns of the past Your eyes, holding on, to the last The streets so vibrant, your touch at my side And as we stroll along life's garden paths Your soul sings in silence Paris at last

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/11/2017 8:31:00 PM
THIS is poetry. --Wesley C.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/11/2017 8:33:00 PM
You are very kind! thank you!
Date: 3/2/2013 11:59:00 PM
Be careful Arthur, your sensitive side is showing! This is a delightful piece, well structured quatrains, each one different. Neat rhyming and glorious imagery! BRAVO my friend!! Keith
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 3/3/2013 12:02:00 AM
LOL thank you, I wont tell if you dont!!!
Date: 2/28/2013 2:18:00 AM
You obviously enjoyed the place, Arthur. Very evocative piece of poetry.
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:57:00 PM
Arthur, wow... le jardin... is that a garden. your poem is lovely, and the imagery is breathtaking ...xox~ LINDA
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Date: 2/20/2013 8:24:00 PM
I loved this romantic write. Very dreamy and enchanting. :) Thanks for your lovely comments on my poems! :)
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Date: 2/19/2013 3:31:00 PM
Hi Arthur, nice write...Seren soupmail
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Date: 2/19/2013 12:56:00 AM
Arthur a very romantic write about a great part of Paris, I love Madeline it is a fabulous place and yes the columns and inside the building are just stunning, Fauchon ah chocolate heaven for those that like it...David
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Date: 2/18/2013 9:52:00 PM
Awesome write!
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Date: 2/18/2013 7:58:00 AM
Your french words are not foreign to me. I was born and raised in Montreal and lived there for the first 42 years of life. Studied french in school... it was mandatory. Have longed to visit Paris but the time is getting short! Hope you are enjoying it here!
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Date: 2/17/2013 10:23:00 PM
Wow, so true that the romantic is not where you are but how you built it :D your poem is "tres bien", loved it! :)
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