Mon Ami

So long, I dreamed of you
From age one, maybe two

All my life, in total anticipation
I could never part with this fascination

The books, the paintings
The lessons, the cravings

Deep in the human psyche
Your kind has been our chi

In battles all thorough history
Your ancestors lead us
Into victory

The moment I saw
That two year old filly
I knew she was for me

The world stopped
Standing in time
Burning adoration my crime

Bucephalus, Man O' War
The very greatest
Let me implore

None can hold a candle
To you under saddle

Miles and miles 
we have rode

As far as the stars
I am told

That Mon Ami
The little bay mare
Answered my prayer

You enchant the sea and sky
For you, my precious,
The Gods I would defy.

8th place in the "Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting" contest by A Rambling Poet

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/28/2011 1:37:00 PM
Amy, Cool to see a great poem in the winner circle. Agape, Moses
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Date: 6/23/2011 8:20:00 PM
this sounds like one awesome horse, Amy. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 6/23/2011 4:37:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Amy. Excellent piece. Great write. xxxRalph
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Date: 6/23/2011 1:41:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of acarol, Amy
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:49:00 PM
Congrats AWESOME AMY on your excellent win in the horse contest with this exciting entry my friend... now where have u gone to ...again? luv..enjoy for poetic excellence luv..
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Date: 6/23/2011 12:21:00 PM
Congratulations and thank you for supporting my contest Amy. So happy to see you are back at the soup. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/25/2010 2:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2010 4:01:00 AM
Full deserve of praise for this fine write thanks
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Date: 12/19/2010 5:31:00 PM
Congrats to AWESOME AMY on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a great one to share with us all today with luv... wishing u and yours the happiest holiday season filled with richest blessings and joys from both of us... hoping all is OK and u will return soon to the site..luv..
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:10:00 AM
Lovely strong write Amy - Fab share -:)
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Date: 3/16/2010 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest ~Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting Contest~ sponsored by ~A Rambling Poet~ Amy. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2010 9:22:00 PM
Belated congratulations to you, Amy. I think you are the only one to have written of a horse! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 3/13/2010 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations Amy, on your win in The Rambling Poet’s “Somewhere A Pet Is Waiting” contest. I must say, it is a delightful read and a wonderful way to start the day. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/10/2010 7:58:00 PM
Oh cool! Didn't even realized I placed! LOL
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Date: 3/10/2010 6:30:00 PM
Congrats Amy on your winning poem and placement in the Pet contest.. a wonderful write and win for u to so enjoy.. as I have enjoyed reading it..luv..Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/10/2010 5:54:00 PM
Lovely story. She must be adorable. congratulations. Joyce
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Date: 3/4/2010 5:11:00 AM
I am so happy your poetry is among the poetry I am reading this morning Amy. I wish you a day full of love and inspiration and wishing youthe best in the contest.. Love,Carol
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:31:00 PM
No, bay- a coloring.
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Date: 3/3/2010 10:15:00 PM
Great Piece, Amy. Lol. I've always felt that way about a motorcycle. When I got my bike, I raced Hermes at 120mph. "Mon Ami" isn't that what Gambit says? It means male friend, but your mare is female. Maybe you mean "Mon Amie". Did you mean "baby mare" for line 28? I enjoyed your references.
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