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What's going on in the sky ?
Some dripped down into my eye.
Birds fall to the ground.
It doesn't stop - something profound.
My lungs just feel ablaze.
130 - clouds - with rain - and haze.
It seems like my school chem lab.
Funny people - with funny skin.
Blotches red and looking thin.
Who knows what's in the clouds.
It mixes together like behind a shroud.
Onward it goes into the breeze.
It's mid-summer, coat on, not to freeze.

from my poem book DREAMS 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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