Mommys Best Burgers In Town Nursery Rhyme

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My mommy makes the best burgers in town
She goes to the markets around
Shops for steak called ground round
She tells the butcher to grind her a pound
of his best savory steak so lean
Mommy tells everyone she makes a mean,
Patty melt and with onions, only if you please
She sprinkles seasonings, adds lots of cheese
Then my mommy grills it until it’s browned
And until all the juicy flavors are drowned
She puts it on the bun, and then another one
Hanging up on the wall is a neon sign,
"Patty’s Fatty’s Are The Best" come in and dine
Everyone clapped, when my mommy was crowned,
for making the best burgers in town!

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Date: 3/1/2023 8:47:00 PM
I do love me a good patty melt ;) very cute! Regards A.S.
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Date: 6/3/2022 6:59:00 AM
Fun and ridiculously delicious Anaya!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 11/10/2022 8:36:00 AM
It was a fun-time contest, all fiction of course!
Date: 5/5/2022 11:31:00 AM
This has a jazzy ring to it! "“Patty’s—Fatty’s—come in and dine!”"
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/18/2022 1:55:00 PM
Laughs Caren & Patty's Melts!
Date: 5/3/2022 4:37:00 AM
Beautiful story of mom. Congratulations!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/3/2022 1:46:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj, so much fun!
Date: 5/2/2022 8:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful nursery rhyme and win my dear friend Anaya! I love your beautiful story. I enjoyed. God bless! Hugs
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/3/2022 1:47:00 PM
Awe, thank you, Len I appreciate your comments always! Congrats on your win! :)
Date: 5/2/2022 6:36:00 PM
I love your story, Anaya. Congratulations on your win., Sorry I gave you an Honorable mention, but you forgot the date at the bottom. Blessings
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I Am Anaya
Date: 5/3/2022 1:48:00 PM
Thank you, I really enjoyed the contest. Thanks for the explanation as well Eve, I appreciate it! Blessed day!
Date: 4/25/2022 10:27:00 PM
I'd die for a good hamburger like you mother's.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/26/2022 8:30:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. They are delish!
Date: 4/23/2022 9:15:00 AM
She'll never be lonely! Enjoyed! Aloha!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/25/2022 4:20:00 PM
I love to cook! ;)
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Rico Leffanta
Date: 4/24/2022 11:04:00 AM
My mother believed the way to a man's heart was through his stomach, but mothers always preach the loftier view . . . .Aloha!
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/23/2022 3:24:00 PM
Hey Rico, the idea came from my Aunt's Cantina--Las Salsas...I work there when I'm in town! El Centro, California! The Best Carne Asada Burritos in town! Mahalo, Rico : )
Date: 4/22/2022 9:30:00 PM
Quite an interesting write Anaya.... ! I am sure your Mommy's burgers will be sold like hot cakes and that she is making bucks out of it :) :)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 4/23/2022 3:14:00 PM
It was originally Burgers & Beer; nursery rhymes are grim; I didn't want to go there! : ( Thank you for stopping in Valsa, I really care what you think : )
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