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Mommys Best Burgers In Town Nursery Rhyme

My mommy makes the best burgers in town
She goes to the markets around
Shops for steak called ground round
She tells the butcher to grind her a pound
of his best savory steak so lean
Mommy tells everyone she makes a mean,
Patty melt and with onions, only if you please
She sprinkles seasonings, adds lots of cheese
Then my mommy grills it until it’s browned
And until all the juicy flavors are drowned
She puts it on the bun, and then another one
Hanging up on the wall is a neon sign,
"Patty’s Fatty’s Are The Best" come in and dine
Everyone clapped, when my mommy was crowned,
for making the best burgers in town!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Scorpio Avatar
March 1, 2023 at 8:47 PM
I do love me a good patty melt ;) very cute! Regards A.S.
Gorelick Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 6:59 AM
Fun and ridiculously delicious Anaya!
Anaya Avatar
November 10, 2022 at 8:36 AM
It was a fun-time contest, all fiction of course!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 5, 2022 at 11:31 AM
This has a jazzy ring to it! "“Patty’s—Fatty’s—come in and dine!”"
Anaya Avatar
May 18, 2022 at 1:55 PM
Laughs Caren & Patty's Melts!
Alex Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 4:37 AM
Beautiful story of mom. Congratulations!
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Thank you, Christuraj, so much fun!
Gasun Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 8:40 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful nursery rhyme and win my dear friend Anaya! I love your beautiful story. I enjoyed. God bless! Hugs
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 1:47 PM
Awe, thank you, Len I appreciate your comments always! Congrats on your win! :)
Roper Avatar
May 2, 2022 at 6:36 PM
I love your story, Anaya. Congratulations on your win., Sorry I gave you an Honorable mention, but you forgot the date at the bottom. Blessings
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2022 at 1:48 PM
Thank you, I really enjoyed the contest. Thanks for the explanation as well Eve, I appreciate it! Blessed day!
Buhagiar Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 10:27 PM
I'd die for a good hamburger like you mother's.
Anaya Avatar
April 26, 2022 at 8:30 AM
Thank you, Victor. They are delish!
Leffanta Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 9:15 AM
She'll never be lonely! Enjoyed! Aloha!
Anaya Avatar
April 25, 2022 at 4:20 PM
I love to cook! ;)
Leffanta Avatar
April 24, 2022 at 11:04 AM
My mother believed the way to a man's heart was through his stomach, but mothers always preach the loftier view . . . .Aloha!
Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:24 PM
Hey Rico, the idea came from my Aunt's Cantina--Las Salsas...I work there when I'm in town! El Centro, California! The Best Carne Asada Burritos in town! Mahalo, Rico : )
George Avatar
April 22, 2022 at 9:30 PM
Quite an interesting write Anaya.... ! I am sure your Mommy's burgers will be sold like hot cakes and that she is making bucks out of it :) :)
Anaya Avatar
April 23, 2022 at 3:14 PM
It was originally Burgers & Beer; nursery rhymes are grim; I didn't want to go there! : ( Thank you for stopping in Valsa, I really care what you think : )
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