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Mommy Is Allergic To Perfume

They come in with their hair dyed purple To match their lavender dress. Tops of their support hose showing We kids laugh a bit about it. If Daddy can reach us we might get a head tap. Mommy cannot sit by these old ladies. They no longer bathe, camouflaging their scent By dunking themselves into a pool of fragrances. Mom is allergic to all of them. So where do they head? Mommy jumps up and runs out coughing. Why doesn’t she just tell them? I do not remember the last time She sat through a church service. Yet here we sit, hearing her coughing from the back. I want to tell them, but a look from my Daddy stops me.

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Date: 4/16/2021 8:28:00 PM
Great write
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/17/2021 4:36:00 PM
I know
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2021 1:05:00 PM
Do these women not "understand yet?"
Date: 4/16/2021 4:12:00 PM
I suffer from migraines so I know the feeling well done Karen
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2021 1:05:00 PM
Selfish people wear all that horrible perfume!
Date: 4/16/2021 11:45:00 AM
I think I recall a very similar experience when I was a young lad. Nice writing, Caren.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2021 1:06:00 PM
Thank you. It is really about my mother's friend.
Date: 4/16/2021 11:31:00 AM
Ha! Such a perceptive child you were, Caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/17/2021 1:06:00 PM
I did not miss much believe me!

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