Notes About The Poem

Moments That Matter

Moments that matter 

Yield moments of clarity 

Revealing false pride 

Releases shackles of shame 

And more moments that matter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 12:35 PM
clarity is everything!! Awesome.
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:40 AM
Thank you Andrea! Certainly is.
Horsman Avatar
January 23, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Wonderful Tanka, Susan. the 4th line is a gem...
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:37 AM
Why thank you! I appreciate you reading it and the awesome comment.
Lindley Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 9:30 PM
Superb Tanka. A revealing message that speaks deeply and with no shades of grey.. A7
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:35 AM
Thanks so much for commenting and for compliment. Very kind. Loving the 7!
Dutta Avatar
January 18, 2016 at 10:39 AM
Well written. Wishing best for the contest. Anisha D
Gentry Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 3:34 AM
Thank you although wasn't for a contest. Glad you liked it.
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