Moments In Bubble

In the distant sea, a misty vista
Wearing a shroud of pale blue illusion
It sends forth silhouette of fiesta
A wake-up call for my faint sensation

On goes the red and pink pursuit for more
Shades of beauty in our daily struggle
A tango of time in tide on the shore
Rustling sounds in the moments of bubble

With the red rose tucked in your bun of hair
The wild wind keen to dislodge your sari
We are aloof in our velvet armchair
Distress accrues in your tense inquiry

The woodpecker looking for more and more
Let’s turn on to answer the purple door
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26/01/2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Nusker Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 9:57 PM
OMG...this is so romantically beautiful. Extraordinary poem, Probir. Congrats! A 7 & a fav.
Gupta Avatar
January 28, 2017 at 6:10 AM
Thank you, Afzal ...
Martin Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:51 AM
Great poem. Congratulations Probir! :-)
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Thank you ...
Medders Tobechi Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 11:44 AM
Lovely sonnet. Congratulations on your fine win.
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:27 PM
Thank you ...
Roper Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:53 AM
Probir, nice sonnet congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Turner Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:49 AM
Very enigmatic Probir. Well done. I always enjoy reading a good sonnet:)
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Poteet Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:59 AM
Delightful, Probir, my grandson loves bubble play (and so do I) prisms of light that they are. I also envision a beautiful sunset in your beginning words. Stanza three is a perfect sensual reference in your imagery. The purple door escapes me, guess I may be that noisy woodpecker. Exciting, colorful piece, a seven in my registry. Congratulations!
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Thank you for the interpretation ... Woodpecking is symbolically a great pleasure ....
Andresen Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:50 AM
-"A tango of time in tide on the shore" ... I love this line, and how you end this wonderful poem, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:22 AM
Thank you ... Glad you like it ... the imagery, I feel, is exclusively mine ...
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:43 AM
A very alluring poem, Probir. Searching for the meaning is the joy of reading this profound poetry. Very enlightening in so many respects. Wonderful imagery as well. Great write. Love you, brother.
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 8:26 AM
Thanks FR ... I come across many poems where I understand no meaning ... Nor do I look for one , as I am satisfied with the suggestions of beauty that they reflect ...
Kimathi Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 6:46 AM
Your work is always splendid, Probir. Congrats for your WIN with this piece!!! ;-)
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Thank you ...
Trifiatis Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 2:22 AM
One is easy to be lost in the labyrinth of images, colors and meanings of such an inspiring poem dear, Probir! A seven.
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Exactly ... Now when I read I myself am a bit annoyed at the labyrinth ... Thank you for being ever supportive ...
Beam Avatar
January 25, 2017 at 8:57 PM
Great imagery, Probir. Though I am still trying, to learn all the meaning
Gupta Avatar
January 26, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Thank you ... There are poems where meaning stays elusive, what we enjoy without any idea of meaning is some rich suggestion ...
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