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In the distant sea, a misty vista Wearing a shroud of pale blue illusion It sends forth silhouette of fiesta A wake-up call for my faint sensation On goes the red and pink pursuit for more Shades of beauty in our daily struggle A tango of time in tide on the shore Rustling sounds in the moments of bubble With the red rose tucked in your bun of hair The wild wind keen to dislodge your sari We are aloof in our velvet armchair Distress accrues in your tense inquiry The woodpecker looking for more and more Let’s turn on to answer the purple door ____________________________________ 26/01/2017

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Date: 1/26/2017 9:57:00 PM
OMG...this is so romantically beautiful. Extraordinary poem, Probir. Congrats! A 7 & a fav.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/28/2017 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Afzal ...
Date: 1/26/2017 11:51:00 AM
Great poem. Congratulations Probir! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/26/2017 11:44:00 AM
Lovely sonnet. Congratulations on your fine win.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 8:27:00 PM
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:53:00 AM
Probir, nice sonnet congratulations on your win Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 1/26/2017 8:49:00 AM
Very enigmatic Probir. Well done. I always enjoy reading a good sonnet:)
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Date: 1/26/2017 8:28:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 1/26/2017 7:59:00 AM
Delightful, Probir, my grandson loves bubble play (and so do I) prisms of light that they are. I also envision a beautiful sunset in your beginning words. Stanza three is a perfect sensual reference in your imagery. The purple door escapes me, guess I may be that noisy woodpecker. Exciting, colorful piece, a seven in my registry. Congratulations!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for the interpretation ... Woodpecking is symbolically a great pleasure ....
Date: 1/26/2017 7:50:00 AM
-"A tango of time in tide on the shore" ... I love this line, and how you end this wonderful poem, Probir - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 8:22:00 AM
Thank you ... Glad you like it ... the imagery, I feel, is exclusively mine ...
Date: 1/26/2017 7:43:00 AM
A very alluring poem, Probir. Searching for the meaning is the joy of reading this profound poetry. Very enlightening in so many respects. Wonderful imagery as well. Great write. Love you, brother.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 8:26:00 AM
Thanks FR ... I come across many poems where I understand no meaning ... Nor do I look for one , as I am satisfied with the suggestions of beauty that they reflect ...
Date: 1/26/2017 6:46:00 AM
Your work is always splendid, Probir. Congrats for your WIN with this piece!!! ;-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 7:09:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 1/26/2017 2:22:00 AM
One is easy to be lost in the labyrinth of images, colors and meanings of such an inspiring poem dear, Probir! A seven.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 7:13:00 AM
Exactly ... Now when I read I myself am a bit annoyed at the labyrinth ... Thank you for being ever supportive ...
Date: 1/25/2017 8:57:00 PM
Great imagery, Probir. Though I am still trying, to learn all the meaning
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/26/2017 7:21:00 AM
Thank you ... There are poems where meaning stays elusive, what we enjoy without any idea of meaning is some rich suggestion ...

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