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Moments

They flash into our midst in a twinkle To seize them in our hold, as we scrabble, They glide into eternity like a trickle
Feb.15.2022 Bite Size Poem No.36.Poetry Contest Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Date: 2/16/2022 8:46:00 PM
I like your musings on moments. Oh, I have a phone call. Just a moment, please... Smiles, gw
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Date: 2/16/2022 1:01:00 PM
I especially love last line, the idea of moments "gliding"; so true. Well penned.
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Date: 2/16/2022 11:26:00 AM
Great visual. A trickle into eternity.
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Date: 2/16/2022 10:39:00 AM
Valsa, you submitted an excellent contest entry. They are equipped with floating wings. Beautifully captured scenes. Blessings dear, friend.
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Date: 2/16/2022 10:16:00 AM
All searching for their niche . . . .Aloha!
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Date: 2/16/2022 6:15:00 AM
Love this.. nice use of words in such a small poem..
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Date: 2/16/2022 5:16:00 AM
They have freedom wings. Moments well captured.
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Date: 2/15/2022 11:33:00 PM
Sweet thoughts as I read this one, Valsa. Good entry! Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
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Date: 2/15/2022 9:42:00 PM
Engrossing! I will pause then contemplate Valsa...ab
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Date: 2/15/2022 7:40:00 PM
Pierces the imagination.
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