Valsa George Poet Free verse

Moments

They flash into our midst in a twinkle
To seize them in our hold, as we scrabble,
They glide into eternity like a trickle 


Feb.15.2022
Bite Size Poem No.36.Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Line Gauthier

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Gershon Wolf February 16, 2022 at 8:46 PM I like your musings on moments. Oh, I have a phone call. Just a moment, please... Smiles, gw

M. L. Kiser February 16, 2022 at 1:01 PM I especially love last line, the idea of moments "gliding"; so true. Well penned.

Victor Buhagiar February 16, 2022 at 11:26 AM Great visual. A trickle into eternity.

Sotto Poet February 16, 2022 at 10:39 AM Valsa, you submitted an excellent contest entry. They are equipped with floating wings. Beautifully captured scenes. Blessings dear, friend.

Rico Leffanta February 16, 2022 at 10:16 AM All searching for their niche . . . .Aloha!

Silent One February 16, 2022 at 6:15 AM Love this.. nice use of words in such a small poem..

Vijay Pandit February 16, 2022 at 5:16 AM They have freedom wings. Moments well captured.

Bill Baker February 15, 2022 at 11:33 PM Sweet thoughts as I read this one, Valsa. Good entry! Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill

Anselmo Boles February 15, 2022 at 9:42 PM Engrossing! I will pause then contemplate Valsa...ab

Kim Rodrigues February 15, 2022 at 7:40 PM Pierces the imagination.