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Moment In Time:

The moment in time when you first see the light, Brings joy to the soul as it burns with delight, There is nothing quite like this spiritual flight, This magical journey is a given birth rite. April~13~2017

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Patricia Cresswell

Date: 9/5/2017 7:51:00 AM

A very great thought. We are still, our spirit, sitting in God's lap when first born.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 6:54:00 PM

Nicely written , White Wolf, congratulations on your win. ~*

White Wolf
Date: 4/22/2017 6:58:00 PM

It was a shock to me that this one even placed! But thank you, Eve /|\

Constance La France

Date: 4/20/2017 2:50:00 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme.

White Wolf
Date: 4/20/2017 6:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Constance /|\

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/19/2017 9:30:00 AM

Hi Rick, Well done, Well done! Congratulations on your fine win. It was well most definitely well deserved:-) Alexis

White Wolf
Date: 4/19/2017 9:37:00 AM

Thank you very much, Alexis! Enjoy your day or evening whatever the case may be! Haha. It's after midnight here but the soup keeps me up sometimes /|\

Eve Roper

Date: 4/13/2017 9:53:00 AM

Nicely done, White Wolf, wonderful flow i can see nature runs your soul.. ~*

White Wolf
Date: 4/13/2017 6:09:00 PM

You have keen insight, Eve. Thanks /|\