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Written - 11th November 2023
Mother, Magical, Moment-Words Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France 

 

 

 

Though many a heart can be broken, nothing breaks a beautiful moment.
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Some moments are too precious to let stray They’re kept safe in memoirs golden display Deep inside your heart’s reminiscence chest To recall cherished moments of the best. When dreamers hopes and fancies flee away Love’s exquisite moments are here to stay The magic of romantic moonlit trysts That lingered till cometh the morning mist. True love is built upon strong foundation It's a gentle, splendorous sensation Bright as a beacon shining through the fog A never ending sweethearts dialogue. Falling in love’s momentous, magnetic Enthralling, evocative, poetic Love brings along moments of purest joy Moments nothing or no one could destroy. One moment of time can last forever To have and behold, cherish and treasure Engraved upon the heart, it shines so fine Once in former times, that moment was mine.

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Date: 11/16/2023 8:45:00 PM
That last line, Belle. So poignant. Tears shed here. Thanks for a moving experience. ~ Sentimental Sam
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/16/2023 8:48:00 PM
Thank you my sentimental friend… Belle
Date: 11/16/2023 11:01:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your wonderful win. I loved reading this one again. Have a great/blessed day with your win.....................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/16/2023 6:22:00 PM
Thank you Paula, I loved reading your ‘Moment’ too. Blessings, Belle
Date: 11/15/2023 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/16/2023 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Karen… Belle
Date: 11/14/2023 9:28:00 AM
I love your "Moment" Rhyme  write/picture/quote. "Good Luck" I also did this one. Have a blessed day..........................
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2023 6:34:00 PM
Thank you and bless you Paula. I love your moment poem and quote too. Belle
Date: 11/14/2023 12:30:00 AM
Great rhymes as always and a pome that is fitting for the theme and contest..
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/14/2023 1:40:00 AM
Thank you Silent One… Belle
Date: 11/13/2023 1:55:00 AM
A fine romantic poem that should do well in the context. Blessings
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/13/2023 6:29:00 PM
Thank you Victor… Belle
Date: 11/11/2023 8:28:00 PM
Another fine entry for the contest, Belle. You're on a roll, my friend. I really enjoyed reading your poetry today. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/12/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thank you very much poet pal Bill, I’m pleased yiu enjoyed the read. Blessings in return, Belle
Date: 11/11/2023 2:27:00 PM
a delightful poem, Belle, extolling the virtues of love in all it's timeless glory. True, one moment in time can last forever. Such an exquisite creation. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/11/2023 3:08:00 PM
Thank you very much Sara, precious moments spent with the ones we love and have loved never fade from memory, they stay in heart and mind forever. Thanks also for your best wishes… Belle
Date: 11/11/2023 6:25:00 AM
Oh, dear Belle, your poem is truly an exquisite masterpiece. Certain instances in life are far too valuable to allow them to slip away. Genuine love is constructed upon a sturdy groundwork, and a mere moment in time possesses the power to endure eternally. It is something to possess and marvel at, to hold dear and treasure dearly. Best wishes for the contest
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/11/2023 3:01:00 PM
Sotto, thank you for the delightful review on this poem and the best wishes, truly appreciated… Belle
Date: 11/11/2023 5:20:00 AM
- Absolutely your cherished moments, Belle :) - A wonderful poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
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Beryl Edmonds
Date: 11/11/2023 2:58:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for comments and best wishes. Have a lovely weekend too :) ~ Hugs in return, Belle

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