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Molasses

When all the bells And all the whistles Are packed away And put back in their wrappers Where is my wandering attention bound to go Faced with the prospect of entering another cold winter season With no sun to heal these festering lesions And I am not saying life is all bad Rather it is a hard time of year Where dreams turn into clashes And the springs in a once proud mattress Make even sleep feel like molasses Maybe tomorrow my angel will come And I will look back on this As nothing more than the ramblings of bliss

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/14/2012 2:05:00 PM
Christopher, i like the measurement of resistance in your poem. The sheer stress and tension, will soon flow like water. Love your ending line... xox~pd
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Christopher Flaherty
Date: 9/14/2012 2:33:00 PM
Thank you very mush Poet Destroyer This poem was me trying to write with a measure or temper my resistance and if you feel the tension it is because i am an angry young man without a cause and the fact a writer whose work is read by massive numbers would comment on it so profoundly warms me for the coming winter. Tahnk you

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