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Modern Senryu / Not An Entry

In homeless shelter Men watching Star Trek Beam us up

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/4/2010 6:24:00 AM

Linda, I've been looking for work by you that I haven't read, but realize I've already had the pleasure of enjoying so many of your poems. I'm ready to be "beamed up" when you are... Happy holidays! Love, Carolyn

Duncan Chappell

Date: 11/24/2010 6:18:00 PM

wow like the image i would like to be be beamed up sometimes my friend

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/16/2010 10:14:00 AM

A nice thought well expressed with apt images, linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/15/2010 11:53:00 PM

oh, how cool the way you put the twist on this one!! (funny you seeing yourself in a home ec dress!)

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/15/2010 5:43:00 PM

enjoyed reading today!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/15/2010 4:12:00 PM

Having visited a homeless shelter, I imagine many of the poor souls there would have preferred to board the enterprise. Excellent modified senryu, Linda! Love, Carolyn

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 9/15/2010 3:11:00 PM

Nice one Linda. I can just picture it. Thanks for you comments. I do write a lot of nonsense, hence the name.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/15/2010 2:45:00 PM

Nice one Linda, enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Diane Locksley

Date: 9/15/2010 2:39:00 PM

If I were in a homeless shelter, this is what I'd be hoping for too, Linda. Very clever as well as touching! Diane