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From the rugged screeching of the heart, Slackened in behavior and chronic pain Is it time to ennoble that worldwide part? This is the ideology from which they start Men ought to rekindle patriotism again From the rugged screeching of the heart. Admiring the breezy and the smart, And now, with clearer touch and brain Is it time to ennoble that worldwide part? The weakened loyalty values depart Neither dogma nor the strain yet remains From the rugged screeching of the heart. Not conducting by the heinous chart That pricked the mass for nefarious gain Is it time to ennoble that worldwide part? Reforming scarce constitution and art Whose emblems are the countless slain From the rugged screeching of the heart, Is it time to ennoble that worldwide part?
1St Place Contest Winner Written: Ocober 31, 2022 Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 12/8/2022 5:34:00 AM
Sotto, a powerful and intense poem. From the rugged screeching of the heart, that is a fierce line. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- x'd poems, Second Chance. Your image is so interesting, well done, blessings
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Date: 12/6/2022 8:29:00 AM
Lasaad, CONGRATS on your win with this expressive piece, which poses a worthy question. Janice
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:20:00 AM
A magnificent composition dressed with the appropriate melody, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Good luck!
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Date: 11/1/2022 8:13:00 AM
Lovely in thought and execution Lasaad. Very nicely done. :) Linda
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Date: 10/31/2022 3:35:00 PM
So well done! Love the refrain, Lasaad!
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Date: 10/31/2022 12:33:00 PM
- A really good question, Las ... a wonderful poem ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 10/31/2022 11:29:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. These are not so easy to write but it seems like yours flows very well. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 10/31/2022 11:25:00 AM
This is a magnificent poem and contest entry, with such an inspirational refrain, Lasaad. A wonderful presentation. Best wishes for the contest, Evelyn
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