Modern Computer

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I think my computer is sick..It is moving at a snail's pace..

. modern computer faster than the speed of light... slow snail's pace today Modern Haiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2011 5:05:00 PM

sorry your computer is slow!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2011 5:04:00 PM

hey, how did i ever miss a haiku of yours?? When I think of how little I accomplished in the 70's and 80's before computers. haha. But what a hectic world it now is!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 12/12/2011 2:21:00 PM

Hope your PC problems get solved. A common occurence in this strange computer age that we now live in. Yours Matthew Anish

Sheol Moribund

Date: 12/7/2011 2:30:00 PM

Dear Sara: That does not compute!!! Just kidding...great little poem and TRUE!!! Thank you for reading and commenting on my poem(s). Peace!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2011 12:21:00 AM

that is me.. the slow snail.... A good computer we all need... Thanks for the smile Sara,..p.d.

Jack Horne

Date: 12/6/2011 7:48:00 AM

Yes, so true, my friend. So true!

Russell Sivey

Date: 12/4/2011 11:56:00 AM

Wow, what a great Haiku, modern Haiku at that! You still stayed with the traditional syllable count, nice! And that subject of the poem, is oh so true...the faster the computers the slower they are! Outstanding Work!!

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 12/4/2011 10:35:00 AM

* "HAHAHAHA * ISN'T THIS THE TRUTH * MY DEAR SWEET BEAUTIFUL, PRICELESS SARA * PERSONALLY IF IT WERE NOT FOR POETRYSOUP * I WOULD HOLD NO DESIRE NOR USE OF THE COMPUTER * VERY CUTE AMID A PERHAPS NOT SO HAPPY WAY * I LOVE THE BEAUTY I FIND INSIDE OF YOU * MY LUV, FOREVER & ALWAYS * SARAH." *