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Mockingbird

mockingbird drinks from thawed birdbath throwing back head.... murder of crows fly
murder: a flock of crows
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Sambourne Avatar
February 18, 2022 at 2:46 PM
Your Haiku's are rich in imagery. I am enjoying every posting. Cheers, Brian
Kendrick Avatar
February 19, 2022 at 9:01 AM
Why, thank you, Brian. I am glad that they brought you enjoyment. Sara
Poet Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Sara, this is an excellent haiku. You've always been an expert at this form.
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 8:14 AM
Why thank you, Lasaad. Your compliment is so welcomed. Sara
Daniel Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 6:49 AM
Never seen a mockingbird before, Sara, I'm sure they must be as interesting as your haiku describes:)
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 2:26 PM
Jo, They are very distinctive in the design and coloring but due to their coloring they probably blend into the surrounds very well. They are very protective of their nest, young, and territory. I appreciate the time spent here reading and commenting on my work. Sara
Wolf Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 7:50 PM
Nevermore! ~ Peace, Gershon
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 6:22 AM
Gershon," And each separate _dying_ ember wrought its ghost upon the floor." That was an interesting work by Edgar Allen Poe. I like his "Annabelle Lee" a little more but some of his works are outstanding. He was a gifted poet. Your visit inspires me. Sara
Skelly Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 8:20 AM
Sara, Intriguing haiku, very well done..Delice
Kendrick Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 6:22 AM
Thank you, Delice..Your visits always lift me up. Sara
Roper Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 3:49 PM
Oh, I like this haiku. Sara... throwing back its head and splashing water all over...
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 2:27 AM
Eve, Thank you. Cold, cold water at that. LOL..Thanks for the nice review. Sara
Proxenos Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 2:03 PM
Don't know too much about mocking birds but a murder of crows is not a welcome sight however from what I read below they are not afraid to defend themselves and their own when these revengeful crows appear. Lovely Haiku Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
Kendrick Avatar
February 2, 2022 at 2:21 AM
Thank you, Jennifer. If you ever observed a mockingbird, you would understand their personalities. LOL.. One day on a busy street in a large city, a mockingbird was attacking everyone that walked down the street because it(they male and female) had built a nest in a small tree right on that busy street. Someone had seen it and filmed it then it was shown on the news on TV. Brave, aggressive and protective of their nest, progeny, and mate. Thanks for the visit. Your comments are supportive. Sara
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January 31, 2022 at 11:34 PM
I am still learning poetry. This is probably my best lesson today... Thanks for this lovely piece sara...
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:33 AM
Phred, I am glad you liked it; however it is not the best example of a Haiku. I am sure that you will find some better examples on here and on the internet. Your visit was uplifting. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 7:17 PM
They get a bum rap…lol! Love the ku!
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:17 AM
I do like those mockingbirds though. I have had a family of them around here a long time. They used to build a nest either in the Holly bush or in the rose trellis. I sit and wonder how they get in and out without getting stuck by thorns or sticky holly leaves? Thanks for the delightful visit. Sara
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 7:05 PM
I found your poem interesting. Never muder of a crow. I guess mocking birds can hold there own with a crow. Enjoyed ~ Debra
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2022 at 4:14 AM
I have seen a mockingbird chasing a single crow in flight. Crows can fly higher and longer so I think the crow would win, but at least the mockingbird puts up a good fight for territory. Your visit was delightful. Sara
Gorelick Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Murder of crows fly, I now understand the terminology, very nice
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 2:20 PM
I am glad that I explained it. Your visit was gratifying. Thanks..Sara
Baker Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 8:15 AM
Awesome Haiku, Sara. I don't see, "murder of crows" very often. Smiles ~ Blessings, Bill
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 2:12 PM
Bill, We have some that come around here and hang around because my husband plants some corn in the spring. They love to eat the seed as it pushes through the ground. Your visit was encouraging. Sara
George Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 4:32 AM
An interesting scene you have painted when ice is thawed and water flows in rivulets
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 2:06 PM
Valsa, I am glad you find it interesting. Your visit was delightful. Sara
Kiser Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 5:38 PM
Yeah those crows don't like other birds getting the drink, but mockingbirds can definitely hold their own.
Kendrick Avatar
January 31, 2022 at 3:46 AM
M.L., Those mockingbirds are a tough species. I have seen them chasing a snake on several occasions. Thanks for your visit.
D. Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 1:10 PM
Good start. You should add more lines.
Kendrick Avatar
January 30, 2022 at 1:11 PM
Lynn, Thanks for the comment and encouragement. Sara
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