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Mocking Bird in rose Checking nest of summer, thorns Defy enemy Thanks Brian for the challenge to do this. I don't know if it is what you're asking to be written or not. I am using Defy as a noun here. This one has been withdrawn from the contest.

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Date: 1/23/2010 6:54:00 AM
This one has been withdrawn from the contest. Sara
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Date: 1/20/2010 11:33:00 AM
Kool attempt Sara >> James
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Date: 1/19/2010 6:53:00 PM
I also had a bit of a problem just collecting my thoughts for an entry into Brian's contest... but his one sounds and reads fine ... I resubmitted from "Precious" to "Manifestation" yesterday in the wee hours of the morning.. so lets see what happens with this venture... good luck in the contest Sara... blessings. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 1/19/2010 9:09:00 AM
Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/19/2010 6:57:00 AM
HI, Sara. good effort with your haiku. I thought about this one. But it's very difficult not using verbs and adjectives! The dying cat was very obviously near death and I knew he would not scratch or bite me. I bet you would have picked him up too if you'd seen his condition! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/19/2010 1:33:00 AM
Well done , with this haiku , Sara and it ain't easy with the nouns .... Best of luck in the contest ...
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Date: 1/18/2010 7:49:00 PM
Nice Haiku, Sara! Good luck on the contest. And thank you for your kind comments on my poem today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/18/2010 7:46:00 PM
the name reminds me of to kill a mockingbird novel.<: i had to read it recently. birds are pretty! -Always Lynette
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Date: 1/18/2010 11:06:00 AM
The mocking bird will soon be checking these place out Sara. Spring is not too far off. Nice Haiku. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 1/18/2010 10:19:00 AM
Many wonderful poems today Sara.... EXCELLENT.....:JP]
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Date: 1/18/2010 9:42:00 AM
Thank you for sharing a piece of your heart with us today in your poetry Sara. Wishing you a wonderful week full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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