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Mocking Bird

Mocking Bird in rose
Checking nest of summer, thorns
Defy enemy

Thanks Brian for the challenge to do this.  I don't know if it is what you're asking to be 
written or not.  I am using Defy as a noun here.  This one has been withdrawn from the 
contest.

animalsimaginationintrospectionlifenaturehaiku

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2010 6:54:00 AM

This one has been withdrawn from the contest. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 1/20/2010 11:33:00 AM

Kool attempt Sara >> James

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/19/2010 6:53:00 PM

I also had a bit of a problem just collecting my thoughts for an entry into Brian's contest... but his one sounds and reads fine ... I resubmitted from "Precious" to "Manifestation" yesterday in the wee hours of the morning.. so lets see what happens with this venture... good luck in the contest Sara... blessings. luv.. Linda-Marie..

Brian Strand

Date: 1/19/2010 9:09:00 AM

Thank you for supporting my contest Sara.Rgds Brian

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2010 6:57:00 AM

HI, Sara. good effort with your haiku. I thought about this one. But it's very difficult not using verbs and adjectives! The dying cat was very obviously near death and I knew he would not scratch or bite me. I bet you would have picked him up too if you'd seen his condition! Luv, Andrea