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Mocked Messengers

Betimes they’ve been sent to speak And when they spoke, they were mocked Oft times the holy messengers did preach the doctrine of self-examination: How were you living, was it idol loving you were giving? Was it hate you were pig pity wallowing in, was it naked lust covering your body of sin? But the heralds of hope, they were ridiculed for asking others to speak honest truth Light bearers put in dark dungeons Baptized in pain for trying to cleanse souls Placed in chains for wanting to make minds whole Tortured bodies slain for daring to monarch oppose Their message of truth tho’ mocked by most, some salvation ears heard — One lost sinner saved by another, two atoned souls plucked from the flames The message to forgive each other, caused two repentant hearts to be changed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/29/2018 1:53:00 AM
Man your message here rings true. Imagine what the world would be like if people really listened to the messengers of God rather then mocking and abusing them in all ways!
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Date: 3/18/2018 5:01:00 PM
Good one...I could imagine those prophets of old...questioning God about the torture they'd behold for preaching the word...and many received what they feared the most...But we have no choice when called to do His work...
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Date: 3/18/2018 11:00:00 AM
Forgiveness and repentness. It is that simple is it not Freddie. You never preach while you get your point across. Deep deep deep words to make the world whole.
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Date: 3/17/2018 2:08:00 AM
Like Leanne I have a mouthful to say. Power write here Freddie. So biblically beautiful about those prophets. Visions of John the baptist come up and lo he was beheaded for a dancing.Salome That always sirs me. I also see you there somewhere. Send in the clowns though. You should see this lot
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Date: 3/16/2018 7:59:00 AM
Powerful pen my friend... another deep poem..
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Date: 3/15/2018 4:41:00 PM
I think your work, if not already, should be produced into book form and distributed to a larger shark pond. This by far is in my mind exceptional, as are all your creations. I feel like I have walked into a cold marbled sanctuary and have been drawn into some dark free zone Roman Catholic confessional box, where 3 Hail Mary's will atone me of every bloodied sin committed. I am not religious and here you have me looking through the grate in the shadows at your swinging crucifix and whispered admonitions and I searching my pockets and sweeping the floor for broken rosary beads...
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Date: 3/29/2018 2:00:00 AM
I agree with you this guy's poems are intensely intense XD

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