Mocha Parfait

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When I wake up, you'll be there Warm mocha eyes, café au lait On cold days. On warm: parfait On rippling breeze of wind, air claire In gliding streams of sundust words I see inside the one you are The one so near, so very far Smithereens of you, carried by birds Perfection, it does not exist You are, I am, nous sommes Each other's imperfection balm: Completing what the other's misses Each time I sleep, you're with me I revel in your familiar wheeze I add mine too, one wheezing breeze Lovely and (im)parfait, across the sea *** March 24, 2017 Copyright © Darren White

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/25/2017 5:05:00 AM

Oh Darren. Good Morning. You beautiful soul you and poet. "Each other's imperfection balm: Completing what the other's misses" are you kidding me Darren with such truth and wisdom. Allow me to let your entry stand. You are amazing. Have a wonderful morning.

Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 6:15:00 AM

Thank you so much Lisa :) We all complete each other, no one is a standalone version, even if we sometimes think we are. You are amazing too, always so happy to see you!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/25/2017 4:21:00 AM

very visual work of art.. i like this one, darren..huggs

Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 4:47:00 AM

Thank you so much Nette :)

White Wolf

Date: 3/25/2017 1:52:00 AM

A very scrumptious write, Duir! Is there nothing you can't write about? Haha.

White Wolf
Date: 3/25/2017 5:00:00 AM

Haha, I bet ya can! /|\

Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 4:47:00 AM

I can also write abourt subjects Soup doesn't want me to write about lol, thanks Budgie.

Sanket Jain

Date: 3/24/2017 8:39:00 PM

Very nice poem. Very nice loving touch could be felt. You are perfectly right when you said Perfection dies not exist. I do agree with you. I am happy and inspired by your comments. My poems are on different sites and are being acknowledged. You are the the first one on this site. So big big big THANK YOU.??

Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 1:18:00 AM

Thank YOU :) Commenting on other people's poems is always a good way to let them know you're out there, ready with your poems!

Doug Vinson

Date: 3/24/2017 6:35:00 PM

Hi Darren. "In gliding streams of sundust words" OKAY have you been reading Chris Green poems? : P (And those desserts look unspeakably good.) +1 for use of "smithereens" as it's getting to be an "old-time" word.

Doug Vinson
Date: 3/25/2017 7:14:00 PM

I'm hip, Daddy-O. :P

Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 1:21:00 AM

The desserts? That's what mocha parfait looks like. Parfait has a double meaning in my poem, it means "perfect" but in the picture it's icecream :)

Darren White
Date: 3/25/2017 1:20:00 AM

Hahaha Doug, as a matter of fact, YES! Are you psychic? ;) Oh, and if you could scan my poems, you'd see I use words like "smithereens" and "myriad" faaaar too often :D