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The mobile phone t a k e s away peace . . .

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 4/21/2016 11:01:00 PM
It sure does. I try to band them during dinner, but the adults are the one's who will not have it. It's a sad mobile phone world... Bhavna... enjoyed. LINDA
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Date: 1/17/2015 10:52:00 AM
Hello my friend, Great shapes poem! Simple, yet profound. Ken
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Date: 12/6/2014 9:37:00 AM
True but as a single father with two daughters 19 and 22 I have to be available 24/7. Great Poem!
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Bhavna Khemlani
Date: 12/8/2014 8:31:00 AM
That's true. Phones are so needed all the time yet takes away peace. :) I wonder what would we do without them.
Date: 11/7/2014 11:54:00 PM
Often it really takes away the peace of mind. I agree with you Bhavna but sometimes it gives the pleasures of undefined words too. It solely depends which one you select. The shape and crispness of your Poem was excellent and thank you for your sweet comments on my poems. Love and best wishes always..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 8/28/2014 2:11:00 PM
Indeed! I can't agree more!
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Date: 8/26/2014 5:40:00 AM
Absolutely true. Really excellent!
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Date: 6/12/2014 10:01:00 AM
Oh this is brilliant, no comments i cannot believe this,,,,the poem is topical, so much truth,,,also extremely clever,,,,keep writing Bhavna, please do,,,,
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