Mm, Oo La La

Ones tongue tastes the base Fruitiness in palate climax Strawberry Cheesecake

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/7/2010 7:06:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest James. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/7/2010 6:42:00 AM

Oh man..can it pack on the pounds.. I love it and your "sweet" senryu. Congrats my dear. BG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/6/2010 4:56:00 PM

short yet very sweet!! way to go with this one James--congrats!! :) -nikko :)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 6/6/2010 3:15:00 PM

Nice senryu and tasty dessert make a good pair. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2010 1:21:00 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in my contest with this oo la la entry ... just wonderful and thankxxx for supporting my contest... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Jayne Eggins

Date: 6/6/2010 5:42:00 AM

James what are you doing to us ? strawberry cheesecake you know how to tempt the mind and the palate lol wonderful poetry I have missed this love Jayne

Marie Harrison

Date: 6/5/2010 5:22:00 PM

Oh my! Lions Tigers and Bears! What a poem.

Date: 6/5/2010 5:06:00 PM

One of my favorite desserts. You can send some my way!!!! Yum! The title caught my attention. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/5/2010 3:47:00 PM

Great choice in dessert fare with this one...Should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/5/2010 1:28:00 PM

mmmm, tasty read lol . . .p.d.