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Mm, Oo La La


Ones tongue tastes the base
Fruitiness in palate climax
Strawberry Cheesecake

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 7, 2010 at 7:06 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's Dreamy Desserts contest James. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

June 7, 2010 at 6:42 AM

Oh man..can it pack on the pounds.. I love it and your "sweet" senryu. Congrats my dear. BG

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

June 6, 2010 at 4:56 PM

short yet very sweet!! way to go with this one James--congrats!! :) -nikko :)

Joyce Johnson

June 6, 2010 at 3:15 PM

Nice senryu and tasty dessert make a good pair. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 6, 2010 at 1:21 PM

Congrats James on your winning poem in my contest with this oo la la entry ... just wonderful and thankxxx for supporting my contest... with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Jayne Eggins

June 6, 2010 at 5:42 AM

James what are you doing to us ? strawberry cheesecake you know how to tempt the mind and the palate lol wonderful poetry I have missed this love Jayne

Marie Harrison

June 5, 2010 at 5:22 PM

Oh my! Lions Tigers and Bears! What a poem.

June 5, 2010 at 5:06 PM

One of my favorite desserts. You can send some my way!!!! Yum! The title caught my attention. Best wishes in the contest. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen