M'Ladies' Favors

With heart divided between old and new both loves so dear and warm and true; 'Cross continents covered with morning dew, so fleet I ran to be with you. Cloth marked, banner blazoned, dearly tried; on I ran to be by your side. Storm gathered, tide washed, a dear heart so true, still on ran I, till I found you. To your widespread arms and warm auburn eyes, your red full lips and limb filled sighs; Onward I wandered thus dreaming of you, to touch your hand and kiss your eyes, Her blason banner so stiff, bright and new, hung on my right for all to view. You saw her colors favor by my side. Your tears welled, coals banked, heart torn pride. You held a silken scarf in your wee hand, turquoise token, woven with golden strand. Your gaze so crestfallen slowly wavers, Yet, reaching forth I accept your favor. Placing your keepsake upon my left side, to be my shield, to be my guide; silken, soft symbol of my hearts delight, to the battle I march on that dark night. And, as the clash of weapons loud, Immersed the days dawn in horrific sounds, Of mortal pain, and death's story; So fervent fought I to return to two. Blessed by M'Ladies' Glory.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/1/2009 3:26:00 PM
I love it just the way you have written, dear Deb. At this moment, I am at the Hampton Inn in Warington, Virginia. I will catch up with you in a couple of weeks. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/16/2009 2:20:00 PM
Great poem! Love it, cher!! - Tim
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Date: 9/15/2009 2:41:00 PM
a true story..research SCA Pennsic wars Aleezabet De Ravenna
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Date: 9/13/2009 1:48:00 PM
I notice, quite impressively, the intensity of the emotion in every stanza...just barely holding back the whole story...allowing the reader to imagine the events that inspired such beauty!....jamie!
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Date: 9/11/2009 11:20:00 AM
Excellent writing, love the first stanza, I felt a deep yearning...Raul
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Date: 9/10/2009 8:07:00 PM
What a great poem, love to meet the lady that wrote this, it's from the heart, and the style, almost the same as mine. God bless you and yours, wow a great poem. Robert A. Ball
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Date: 9/10/2009 5:36:00 PM
WOW!!!! That's all I can say about this masterpiece, dear Deb. Lainie, And thank you for your kind comments.
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Date: 9/10/2009 7:35:00 AM
Nice rhyme. Keep writing. Sara
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