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Trionet
Created by L Milton Hankins, a Trionet is a two stanza poem. The first stanza follows the rules for a standard triolet of eight (8) lines ABaAabAB (capital letters are repeated lines). The second stanza consists of six (6) lines, formed with five (5) lines repeated from the first stanza and adding an appropriate non-repeated rhyming last line with a rhyme scheme of AAABBb.

Dawn pierces the ebony heart of night, its blood spilled onto alabaster clouds. As scarlet skies fade with the morning light, Dawn pierces the ebony heart of night, and shy shadows slowly slink out of sight The horizon wrapped in misty pink shrouds, Dawn pierces the ebony heart of night, blood spilling onto alabaster clouds. Dawn pierces the ebony heart of night, as scarlet skies fade with the morning light and shy shadows slowly slink out of sight. The horizon wrapped in misty pink shrouds, its blood spilled onto alabaster clouds the sun rises, to the acclaim of crowds. (Trionet) 6/04/202

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Date: 7/2/2021 5:12:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/3/2021 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Beata, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 7/2/2021 11:53:00 AM
Great verse , Emile, congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/3/2021 5:49:00 AM
Thanks Eve, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 7/2/2021 10:36:00 AM
Such stunning imagery i have just written a ninette about dawn breaking. many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/2/2021 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Jan, as always, your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2021 9:48:00 AM
A superb Trionet Emile, the rising of the dawn beautifully expressed. Congratulations on a well deserved win… Belle
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/2/2021 10:15:00 AM
Thanks Belle. as always your comments are most appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 7/2/2021 8:32:00 AM
Emile, I absolutely loved your poem. Beautiful work, and I congratulate you for its spot in my contest. IMHO, it, too, deserved a trophy!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 7/2/2021 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Milt, both your comments and the placement are must welcome my friend, Emile.
Date: 6/4/2021 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful write, Emile. I love it. God bless you always, sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/4/2021 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Regina, as always, your comments are welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.

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