Misty Clouds

'Twas a hot summer day
When a cloud floated by
In a stately pearl gray
And a thousand feet high.
How I wished, how I wished, I could meet it in the sky

For I say, if I could
I would float in a cloud
If I could, then I would
Have a cool, misty shroud.
From above, from above, I would watch a world that's proud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 2:48 PM
I wish that I could just float around the sky with the clouds, and look down at the beauty below me. Very lovely piece of poetry here, Isaiah! I enjoyed it very much!....Thank you for commenting kindly on my poem, "The Shy Rose". And, thanks for responding to my soup mail....I have responded back to yours
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Lovely win...Linda
Kendrick Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 11:35 AM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..Very unique..Sara
Morgan Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 6:53 PM
maybe i should hitch a ride too Isaiah Congrats to you on your win. Morgan
Richards Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 9:05 AM
Oh.......love the last line especially, and the way you summed it up. Beautiful !!
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August 27, 2013 at 12:42 AM
Congratulations on your place on the winners list Isaiah xx
A  Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:31 PM
a wonderful win... ~Love ~~SKAT
Gorelick Avatar
August 26, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Thank you for entering my contest..so glad to see your name pop up..congrats. BG
Chircop Avatar
August 15, 2013 at 2:54 PM
It would be wonderful to float on cloud nine..and jump on a rainbow : )..Dreamy imagination..Very beautiful ..Everytime I see a cloud..Im gonna be thinking 'Mr I is up there floating proud : )
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