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A Total Solar Eclipse, The Night Sky

You are the mistress of the night in red, yellow, orange or white, not just like some distant star. Of the night, mistress, you are. So many shapes and forms you take with faces at the Earth you make and from your light there are moonscapes. Take you so many forms and shapes. Sometimes you touch my kitchen floor, a streak of white light I adore. Clear moonlight is never too much. My kitchen floor you sometimes touch. You rule romance in everyone, reflection of the guardian sun. Sometimes the say that you are blue. Romance in everyone rule you. 6/5/20 Swap The Verse Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May

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Date: 6/29/2020 2:59:00 PM
This is awesome, so beautifully written. Well deserved placement.
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Date: 6/29/2020 4:32:00 AM
What a beautiful mistress of the night to have in the form of soothing moon through these quatrains. Congrats. Mohan
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Date: 6/28/2020 7:24:00 PM
The moon sets the stage for romance, Wonderful write Janis, Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/28/2020 5:15:00 PM
this is so sweet and romantic. congrats in the contest, dear.
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Date: 6/28/2020 3:16:00 PM
This is creatively done Janis! A wonderful muse. Congratulations on your win. Keep writing and inspiring :) Blessings
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